VileViolet
Reptile Researcher
I'm a smart thinker, only when I feel like thinking smart.
Posts: 49
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Post by VileViolet on Jun 22, 2004 22:00:56 GMT -5
kiss me touch me feel me
dont have the guts to kick me when im screaming come on and kick when im down if u can make love to me then what the hell u can hit me
i think u have issues and u need to go see someone about that cause your potato ed up in the head and thats a prolem cause if your the only one who can hit me only when im down then u have no strength for yourself im sure if i was up you would run cause you were scared of me poor, defensless, little me
sometimes i wish u would trip and fall over that step you know that step that u step on every day and when u fall youll break your neck and when u come home i wont be there i moved on u cant hit me anymore your poor, defensless, little monkey. dont potato with me when i say u can potato with anyone but me cause i dont like you and u dont like me too so thats why i wish that you would trip over that step that step that you step on every day and when u fall youll break your neck on the floor
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Post by Whales on Jun 23, 2004 8:16:34 GMT -5
I like it. It obviously holds a lot of feeling in it.
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Post by aqueousmartini on Jun 23, 2004 13:47:29 GMT -5
Very good, very emotional. *claps*
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Post by Addieor on Jun 23, 2004 20:37:31 GMT -5
I kept singing it in my head while reading. Good job!
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Post by timartwonis on Jun 23, 2004 22:48:02 GMT -5
That is so good! It gave me the shivers. Literally. You are an awesome poet. It owuld make a great song. Is it out of experience?
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