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Post by Soidanae on Jun 23, 2004 23:41:16 GMT -5
No, I didn't think of a title, just a spur of a moment thing... Some of the verses are all right, some aren't....
I see myself floating rising in the air And the pearly gates above Begin to open
The higher I go The longer I have to fall Cause I won't be staying up No, I won't be staying up I'm floating on a balloon of love And it'll pop when the pressures gone
Why did you leave me first? I wanted the last thing I saw to be your face.
The feeling when you were dying was the worst Cause I knew I wouldn't see you again Now it seems, I'm going up to your space But I know there's a plummet to come
Now my head pokes through the clouds I see your toes one last time Now I look into your eyes Gouged out By these nails of mine The .45 made a mess Out of your beautiful nose But still I think You're the most beautiful Girl I've ever known
I know you want to slap me But you don't have any arms. Trust me, this was easier than breaking up You didn't come to any lasting harm.
I see myself falling One last time Into the mouth of the beast Yet still, I think you'd love to smile at me If you still had any teeth.
Here I am Stuck in the chains of memory Much like you were When I held the key
You know I loved you I couldn’t bear to let you go You knew, too What I was going to do
The gunshot rang out loud The axe made little noise And when I broke your jaw I laughed like little boys
The barrel went to my head next I never, ever wept And now I’m stuck in the endless loop Of right before you’re dead.
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Post by Soidanae on Jun 24, 2004 20:09:48 GMT -5
It's certainly not one of my better ones. Still, did good for two minutes... Now to waste even more space: Eye to Eye In the darkness of the sky a star is shine and bright enough to catch mine eye
I look upon it filled with wonder and with my mind the distances sunder
To see a star my mind begins to drift and by this star the planets swirl
Twirling, twirling ever swirling strikes me that these worlds are falling to the sun, but one
It's safe this greenish orb of life And on it I find no toil nor strife
and somehow these men of earth afar have lived as we did 'round this yellow star
And this world it looks so much like ours I find my eye to soar above the cars?
What world is this that it can be so much like us there's one like me!
He's standing upon a hill Like I and there he looks to the stars towards my eye.
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Post by Soidanae on Jun 24, 2004 23:42:40 GMT -5
I might try that. Lauren actually lives in the same town as me.
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Post by VioletsThorn on Jun 24, 2004 23:48:51 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300]The first poems kinda new-agey-poe-like with the whole i killed u yet i love u its anabel lee meets the fall house of usher. [/glow]
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