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Post by esmesqualor3 on Jan 3, 2004 7:52:28 GMT -5
Ok, here's mine(sorry I've done it so late):
I can't let go
Why do I keep you?
Why don't I just let go and run free
I can't.
You've to much power over me
I'll push then pull you back
I can't let go.
Brigde:
Go, Go, Go, and run far away
Away from me
Leave me in peace
In silent peace
Chorus:
Leave me alone
I'll find someone else
Not you
I would
But I can't
Brigde:
Go, Go, Go, and run far away
Away from me
Leave me in peace
In silent peace
Why can't I let go?
Why don't I?
Why?
I can't let you go.
Chorus:
Leave me alone
I'll find someone else
Not you
I would
But I can't
Chorus:
Leave me alone
I'll find someone else
Not you
I would
But I can't
LEAVE ME ALONE!
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 3, 2004 7:54:19 GMT -5
nice
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Post by esmesqualor3 on Jan 3, 2004 12:33:36 GMT -5
Thanks. I was a bit late, I know.
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Jan 3, 2004 12:35:29 GMT -5
Very good!
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Post by esmesqualor3 on Jan 3, 2004 12:37:16 GMT -5
Woo Hoo! I had to go for something a bit more emotional than my normal stuff. My normal stuff is a bit weird. Hehe. You'd understand if you heard it.
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Post by jayK on Jan 4, 2004 5:54:49 GMT -5
Next round folks, get song writing. I can officially announce that Jack2005 has left!  |
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Post by esmesqualor3 on Jan 4, 2004 6:09:58 GMT -5
I think I'll kill myself
I'm going to kill him
What he did to me
I was scarred
He hit so hard
Will I get home tonight?
Tonight?
Bridge:
I think I'll kill myself
Stand on a bridge
Look at the pretty lights
Then...
Bridge:
I think I'll kill myself
Stand on a bridge
Look at the pretty lights
Then...
He should be executed
Hung or shot
Being arrested isn't enough punishment
Not for him
I want him to be dead
Killed...
Chorus:
He hurt me
When I die
He'll pretend to help me
Say it was gods choice
It wasn't him
He'll say...
Chorus:
He hurt me
When I die
He'll pretend to help me
Say it was gods choice
It wasn't him
He'll say...
It wasn't me.
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Post by jayK on Jan 4, 2004 7:55:00 GMT -5
It'll be tough to go through this time, I know I mentioned you don't have to rhyme, but that was bad with a random un rhyming line in each verse, But I'll say 6/10, we'll have to wait till the vote
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Jan 4, 2004 9:58:01 GMT -5
I did
by Dupin
[Verse I]
Sitting here,
I just can't believe it,
How did I get here,
Why couldn't I just leave it
Lying here,
Why must I love you so,
I want to disappear
I just want to go.
[Bridge]
Through the rain,
I came for you,
what could be done,
what could I do?
I followed you,
through all the gloom,
now I'm sitting here,
in the dark room,
wondering: where are you?
[Chorus]
You left me
You went away,
whilst I was in the dark,
you didn't see,
you didn't say,
I couldn't come for you,
I couldn't find you
i did.
[Verse Two]
Thinking here,
why did I bother,
coming to find you through all the bad,
Shouting here!
I must really love her,
Or I must just be, really sad!
Crying here,
I lost you,
and I'm wondering how,
I'm hoping here,
is it true?
that you're just, a selfish cow!
[Bridge]
Through the rain,
I came for you,
what could be done,
what could I do?
I followed you,
through all the gloom,
now I'm sitting here,
in the dark room,
wondering: where are you?
[Chorus]
You left me
You went away,
whilst I was in the dark,
you didn't see,
you didn't say,
I couldn't come for you,
I couldn't find you
i did.
[Verse 3]
Now I'm lost,
in my mind,
I can't get out,
I can't find myself
I hope your here,
to ease the pain,
But you're not,
I'm here in the rain.
Alone,
you left me.
[Bridge]
Through the rain,
I came for you,
what could be done,
what could I do?
I followed you,
through all the gloom,
now I'm sitting here,
in the dark room,
wondering: where are you?
[Chorus]
You left me
You went away,
whilst I was in the dark,
you didn't see,
you didn't say,
I couldn't come for you,
I couldn't find you
i did.
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Post by jayK on Jan 4, 2004 10:00:02 GMT -5
atleast yours Rhymes! very good, i just need the other 2 songs!
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 4, 2004 16:43:33 GMT -5
i can't think of anything
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Post by The Amazing...Spider-Man! on Jan 4, 2004 16:44:58 GMT -5
i can't think of anything
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Feb 8, 2004 11:38:39 GMT -5
*practises singing with a water bottle*
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Post by DetectiveDupin on Feb 28, 2004 13:54:14 GMT -5
Is this gonna continue.
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Post by jayK on Feb 28, 2004 14:28:57 GMT -5
yes, but who is left?
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