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Post by Dante on Apr 17, 2005 8:50:07 GMT -5
Just like in real life.
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Post by odh on Apr 17, 2005 8:51:12 GMT -5
Go me, winning! VFD for me wo_ld mean Vestib_le For Disc_ssion.
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Antenora
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Post by Antenora on Apr 17, 2005 9:33:59 GMT -5
James, is the U key on your keyboard broken? (Edit: I _nderstand that it is indeed)
I like this story. If we were building a secret society, I bet we would argue about the name for a while.
VFD is good, because as Fictional!Me said, it can mean anything each person wants it to.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Apr 17, 2005 9:49:14 GMT -5
Looks really good so far, J. If possible, could you put me in? It's OK if you don't. Please write more soon.
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Post by Celinra on Apr 17, 2005 10:33:37 GMT -5
I like it so far. I think you got everyone's character down pretty well. And, of course, I like that I was the one to settle things. It sounds like something I'd do, though... if friends argue about whether the beverage is called "soda" or "pop," I'll say it's "soda pop" (even though I actually call it "pop"). So... yeah.
I can't wait to read more!
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Post by PJ on Apr 17, 2005 15:43:23 GMT -5
J hit her head against a desk. ;D That made my day. Do continue please!
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Post by j42 on Apr 17, 2005 15:57:11 GMT -5
A few days later, Akbar saw someone at the library door. He opened it. "Hello. OOGAH BOOGAH." Akbar said. "Hi. Is this where all the 667ers are meeting?" The boy asked. "Who are you?" "Snicket, from 667. I had some contacts who told me that the 667ers would be meeting here..." "You mean you saw the thread," Akbar said. "Ssh. I like playing make believe." Snicket said. "Anyway, I thought maybe I could have the rights to hold another 667 meeting, only this one would be better. And maybe afterwards we can form a society--" "No." Akbar said. "Oh..."Snicket looked crestfallen. "Well, is Antenora here?" "No," Said Antenora, who was shelving books. "Can I come in?" Snicket said. "No." Akbar said. "Bye." "Ok. I might return in..." Snicket checked his watch. "7 years. Bye."
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Post by PJ on Apr 17, 2005 23:06:27 GMT -5
Splendid! Shall the FBI man return and bring the society apart? Will he destroy us all? For the sake of us all, do write more!
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Post by Dante on Apr 18, 2005 0:45:05 GMT -5
I do feel slightly sorry for Snicket, but I must admit that that was very funny and accurate.
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Post by j42 on Apr 18, 2005 4:39:45 GMT -5
Splendid! Shall the FBI man return and bring the society apart? Will he destroy us all? For the sake of us all, do write more! I'll write more just to incorporate the FBI man.
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Antenora
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Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Apr 18, 2005 5:10:17 GMT -5
I also think this was funny, and rather accurate. You're good at characterization.
Including FBI man would be great.
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Post by j42 on Apr 19, 2005 15:27:52 GMT -5
They finally got everything in order. If this were a movie, there would be a montage of scenes that showed all the 667ers working: Robert teaching people ninjitsu, Antenora doing paperwork, Sam feeding chickens. But it's not ghey and cheesy, so there won't be a montage. Anyway, their peaceful world was threatened one day when there was a mysterious voice. "ATTENTION 667ERS. WE HAVE DISCOVERED YOUR SECRET ORGANIZATION AND YOU MIGHT BE UNDER THE THREAT OF TERRORISTS." Everyone looked at Tragedy. He shrugged. Then they all looked at J. J shrugged. They all started looking at each other--Char, Celinra, Pandora, Antenora. "If we ignore it, will he go away?" Dupin asked. "We could light him on fire," Dante said, gazing into a lit match. "Let me go outside and see. I bet it's Snicket playing a prank or..."make believe."" Antenora said, getting up from her armchair and walking to the first floor of the library.
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Post by uyersuyer on Apr 19, 2005 16:42:29 GMT -5
I feel so...almost entirely unmentioned. Why am I even on the freakin' cast list?
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Post by j42 on Apr 19, 2005 16:46:48 GMT -5
I feel so...almost entirely unmentioned. Why am I even on the freakin' cast list? Patience...I can only add so many.
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Post by Snicket on Apr 19, 2005 16:52:37 GMT -5
Even though you may think I would be insulted at this, I'm not. Instead, I like when random people make fun of me portrying me as an idiot. Also I would never be smart enough to say that terrorists were atacking a building.
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