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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Jun 7, 2005 16:44:29 GMT -5
Thankyou for the praise, everyone. I leave Ottawa tomorrow morning and from then will not have net access till I get back. So no prequel will be posted before the end of this month. :''( I suspect I shot that dart at Antenora right at the beginning, too. I rather thought that it was obvious who shot the dart. It definitely wasn't you though.
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Post by A. the Returned on Jun 8, 2005 5:58:06 GMT -5
Innocent Annelise. Hehehe. Nice ending. So Pandora and Celinra killed me. And I thought it was PJ.
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Post by ersatzbeatrice on Jun 8, 2005 15:51:51 GMT -5
A tall, pretty female looked down at him questioningly with her bright brown eyes. “Oh,” she said in a slightly Spanish voice, “We’re sharing.” It was Beatrix. I've only noticed now that I'm in this story but COME ON!! I have only started learning Spanish a couple of months ago! Ai, caramba! Nós falamos português no Brasil!! And haha, no one told be about Beatrik. That sounds... funny. Or Deritrix. xD (I know I've only scanned the other chapters, since I'm studying for my Portuguese teste tomorrow, but what happened to Beatrix? I was kidnapped and...? Don't I get an ending? I didn't see one. *sad*) It was pretty good story, though. People who know how to write well (like you, Akbar) should do it more often and post here. =P
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Jun 10, 2005 0:23:00 GMT -5
(I know I've only scanned the other chapters, since I'm studying for my Portuguese teste tomorrow, but what happened to Beatrix? I was kidnapped and...? Don't I get an ending? I didn't see one. *sad*) It was pretty good story, though. People who know how to write well (like you, Akbar) should do it more often and post here. =P PJ killed you. Because if there was a real Bea roaming around, it would kind of ruin his clone idea. " ' Oh,' said random-member-created-for-the-purpose-of-fixing-the-plot-holes-in-Akbar's-story, 'There goes Beatrix. Wait a second. Didn't I just see Beatrix? Oh no! she must have been cloned!!' *utter pandemonium*" And I'm hardly a good writer. I just seem to be able to amuse people with my ramblings.
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