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Post by PJ on May 5, 2005 19:12:02 GMT -5
Interesting theory...although at this point, it could still pretty much be anyone ... that is, except the people who are dead. There is always the possibilty that they faked their death so as to allay any suspicion. It was done in a murder play I saw at school.
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Post by Sora on May 5, 2005 23:23:23 GMT -5
Upon thinking about it, we haven't ruled ou the fact that Kimia is trying to hit on Ennui, and Amber must be out of the way for her devious plot to be put in place.
Hey its just a thought.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on May 6, 2005 1:52:13 GMT -5
I don't like doing 'ships' in my stories. I sometimes use them to add to the plot, but I don't like creating them.Please don't get confused by what seems to be a ship in the second part of this chapter. In case you were wondering, Tifah's speech is aunthentic. It's from the PMs. On a happier note, the exmas are fianlly over!
Ennui gaped. Kimia stopped sobbing, wiped her eyes and looked up defiantly. “Aimee is dead. Akbar has gone missing. Amber is fighting at the gates.” She said slowly, monotonously. Her words dripped with disinterest. “What? How?” asked Ennui anxiously. He was not going to be deterred by her lack of enthusiasm. “Aimee was killed during our escape. Derik is in hiding. Akbar has gone missing and nearly all the information you receive is written by n00bs and then passed through Setnick for a spell check. They’ve captured her. They've also learnt how to forge Akbar's signiture on the notes.” Replied Kimia sadly. Ennui gave her a grim look and then went to search for something from his bag. He slowly took out a long, slim rapier with a curved, swept handle. It shone in the muffled sunlight and the tip was made of pure silver. Grabbing it, he ran out the door.
Outside, in the pillared hallway, the floor was swept with blood. He could just make out a tall girl with long brown hair at the end. Amber. She was bravely fighting with 3 n00bs but she was weakening. Suddenly a tiny girl with an angry expression appeared in front of him, dangerously waving a pair of chopsticks. “Oi!” she yelled, “I iz tifah” “Go away.” Was his reply. “well you don't have to act all stupid about it is just ask a simpile question if i was bugging you why do you reply huh so next time think of sending some one a message about stop bugging them try not responding then no body else would send you a message . let me tell you something when some one send you a message and you reply then that means you are interested by you sending s message that mean you were interested in what i am saying if you don't want me to send you another message then don't reply to this message i just wanted you to get that strait O.K oh and i got you hot mail e-mail address so that means i will send a messaga much worse than this .” she said, in a long flow of barely understandable n00bspeak. He ran her through with his rapier and turned towards Amber. Deadly, I believe, was the word.
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Derik shivered. The SS section had at least been lit. The cave where he was hiding now was just an unfurnished hole in the earth with a small trapdoor leading up to the Archives It was one of the few safe places which was not wrecked. There was supposed to be a moderator meeting here in the night, meanwhile Derik just huddled tighter. He didn’t like the cave. Suddenly the trapdoor opened with a resounding creak. A tall, pretty female looked down at him questioningly with her bright brown eyes. “Oh,” she said in a slightly Spanish voice, “We’re sharing.” It was Beatrix.
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Post by Celinra on May 6, 2005 2:19:39 GMT -5
Yay for exams being over!
The story is moving wonderfully, I can't wait to read more!
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Post by Antenora on May 6, 2005 4:58:38 GMT -5
So it seems Tifah is evil after all! Her speech is hilarious.
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Post by SnicketFires on May 6, 2005 7:40:16 GMT -5
The chopsticks were a nice touch.
I'm glad exams are over. How do you think they went? I liked it, and I like Beatrix's description. More, please.
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Post by Dante on May 6, 2005 8:31:48 GMT -5
Excellent, I was right!
...Maybe!
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Post by Amber on May 6, 2005 9:19:12 GMT -5
Yzay! *is not dead*
I liked tifah's speech, though I had to read it through more than once.
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 0:06:16 GMT -5
OOH Beatrik! ;D Nicely done. Speaking of Tifah, we are currently PMing each other. She initiated the attack by simply writing "Hi" in a PM.
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Post by Dismay on May 7, 2005 7:27:49 GMT -5
I really like this, but i can't figure out the murderer yet. I've been trying to check my e-mails every day to see of any more had been posted. Horray for no more exams (for you!). My exams are going to be in late June. And next week. State => county ones, to be exact.
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Post by Sora on May 7, 2005 20:14:29 GMT -5
Woo Hoo, new chapter! Very good work, I must insist on the fact that ships are not all that bad. Only if you put too people that are totally wrong for each other would it seem pointless.
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Post by PJ on May 7, 2005 20:49:03 GMT -5
Only if you put too people that are totally wrong for each other would it seem pointless. Yeah, like PChar. What kind of idiot would invent that?
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on May 8, 2005 23:21:08 GMT -5
Dante looked up dangerously at the podgy, black-clad boy standing before him. With a shrill “he-yah” the boy’s muscular hand came down on Dante’s arm. Dante glared at the boy, and suddenly the grip stiffened. The boy was trapped. Hypnotized, by the icy-blue gaze of the warden of ASOUE. With a swift kick, Dante disposed of the really cool member and began the long walk up the stairs of Burdensome Books. His chambers awaited him upstairs.
But another thing awaited him as well, not nearly as normal.
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Kelsea ducked, the arrow missing her by a fraction. Picking up her blade, she lunged at the tall girl. Suddenly two more n00bs attacked from behind. She was trapped. With a mighty jump, she cleared all three and threw blades at each of their throats. “Muah.” she said, the frozen look of death disfiguring their faces. She walked off, her long robe catching the wind and flying, like a black shroud, in her wake.
-- Ennui and Amber huddled against the huge, cool marble pillar. Somewhere in the distance, another ANO6 division was on its way. Suddenly, Ennui’s elbow pushed against a knob by mistake. A large section of the marble slid in behind another part and Amber slipped down into the cavity. Ennui followed soon after, and together they plunged into a dark labyrinth, deep below the lavish marble of the palace. The Underpath.
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Beatrix settled herself in quite quickly. As Derik gaped, she transformed the dark cava into a cheerful, if tiny, home. “We need to get out of here.” Said Beatrix, quite cheerfully. “What? Why?” questioned Derik. “There is going to be a meeting. In the SS. Tonight.” she replied ,a mysterious gaze slowly working its way into her hazel eyes. “Why? What for?” he asked, getting more than a little worried. “All will be revealed. Tonight.” she replied, before collapsing into a deep, tranquil ,yet oddly disturbing sleep.
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Post by PJ on May 8, 2005 23:29:29 GMT -5
Nicely done. So many tiny weird things happening! How will you tie them all up in the end?
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Post by A. the Returned on May 9, 2005 2:52:32 GMT -5
An other interesting chapter. I have completely lost track of the murderer though which obstructs my plots for revenge... will we see them again anytime soon?
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