Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on May 9, 2005 5:14:40 GMT -5
Very good chapter(although we still don't know what's happening with J and I).
So many strange things are happening.
Also, I hear that the real Tifah is gone.
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Post by Amber on May 9, 2005 9:45:14 GMT -5
Yzay! I can just imagine that, I'm stood there then I fall down a big hole. I wonder where it goes...
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Post by Dante on May 9, 2005 10:08:05 GMT -5
Suddenly, Ennui’s elbow pushed against a knob by mistake. A large section of the marble slid in behind another part and Amber slipped down into the cavity. Ennui followed soon after, and together they plunged into a dark labyrinth, deep below the lavish marble of the palace. The Underpath. Where there's important evidence to be found, I'll wager! Ahem. Anyway, the denouement seems to be approaching. Any guesses as to the identity of the culprit?
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Post by Ennui on May 9, 2005 10:42:45 GMT -5
I suspect SnicketFires, to a large degree...and I'm still not letting Celinra off the hook. Akbar is highly suspicious. Kimia is too obvious...
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Post by Amber on May 9, 2005 11:22:48 GMT -5
But sometimes it's the one that seems too obvious.
Akbar, will you be finished before you leave on the 15th(?), or will you leave us right before the end?
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Post by Celinra on May 9, 2005 12:09:46 GMT -5
Ooh, things seem to be coming to a close. I can't wait to see how it ends! Especially since I wonder what will happen with fiction!Me.
Hmm... later when I have more time, I'll have to go through and see what's happened with all the suspects thus far, and which are even still alive.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on May 9, 2005 12:14:47 GMT -5
Akbar, will you be finished before you leave on the 15th(?), or will you leave us right before the end? Good question, Amber. I really don't have an answer to that one. I hope to have it done before that, but I'm not sure. Worst comes to worst I'll give Derik a copy of the last chapter in NYC (if our meeting actually happens) and he can post it.
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Post by PJ on May 9, 2005 17:57:53 GMT -5
There are still too many possibilities for me to try to guess. And I'm too lazy to make a list.
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Post by Sora on May 11, 2005 22:37:27 GMT -5
Excellent chapter, keep it up.
Akbar and J are incriminating.
But here's a thought, what about Swans? She is Global Moderator.....
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Likes: 113
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Post by Antenora on May 12, 2005 12:45:20 GMT -5
But here's a thought, what about Swans? She is Global Moderator..... Ah, intriguing guess....the innocent-seeming minor character person whom I don't think is even in this, but then again my guess may not mean much since I have a memory like a tattered fishnet. Anyhow, I eagerly await the next update, whenever it may be.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on May 13, 2005 0:39:16 GMT -5
Lish’s head throbbed. He’d been in constant battle since he’d arrived two days ago, from The Quiet World. He rapped his rifle against the wall, awaking a slumbering guard. “Listen to me!!!1111”yelled Lish, in an annoyingly shrill voice. The guard stood up and saluted weakly. Lish was one of the leaders of the ‘helper n00bs’ from other areas, and had been made an honorary general of the ANO6. “Yes, like, sir!” he yelled. The ‘helper n00bs’ irritated him. There was class distinction in the really cool member society. Members of the ANO6 or just any n00bs from 667, were considered just a tiny bit better than others. More used to fighting, to be sure, but they were also smarter. The solider was in the ANO6. “We have, like, received, orders that we will shortly be, like, receiving instructions.” Trilled Lish, his tenor notes shattering the relative calm of the air. The guard nodded. Orders were orders, whether you liked them or not.
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Antenora woke up. Her room was in a mess. Sounds of fighting and pain came from below, and Antenora got upset. Getting out of bed slowly, she noticed that J. wasn’t there. She reasoned that she must have gone to join the battle, and began to tidy up. Whilst tidying up, she noticed something on her bedside table. A scrap of burnt paper.
Lady Antenora,
Meet us in the SS section at midnight. It shall all be solved then.
Yours, The signature was burnt off. Antenora was surprised. The handwriting looked familiar, but she couldn’t quite place it.It reminded her of Ennui, but he was in quarantine. For the rest of the morning, she felt a strange uncanny feeling throughout the halls of 667.
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But the time for feelings was long gone. Now was a time for action.
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Post by Amber on May 13, 2005 0:44:13 GMT -5
I like it. Very intriguing, do write more.
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Post by A. the Returned on May 13, 2005 2:55:15 GMT -5
I like the "Orders were orders, whether you liked them or not." part. Yes, do write more.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
Posts: 15,891
Likes: 113
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Post by Antenora on May 13, 2005 5:44:45 GMT -5
Cool, I recieve a mysterious letter. Could someone have been forging Ennui's handwriting?
Lish is funny.
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Post by PJ on May 13, 2005 6:34:55 GMT -5
Cool, I recieve a mysterious letter. Could someone have been forging Ennui's handwriting? Lish is funny. I suspect Amber. Do write more.
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