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Post by Sora on Jun 7, 2005 22:13:43 GMT -5
Oh my god you read my mind I was going to do something like this.
Very intriguing chapter, nice intro too. You've captured my interst well, can't wait for Entry 2.
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Post by Celinra on Jun 7, 2005 22:47:17 GMT -5
I likes it so far.
*waits for her appearance more*
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Post by PJ on Jun 7, 2005 22:54:36 GMT -5
*waits for her appearance more* Hehe, you only appear in the Fifth Entry. And when you do......let me just say....heh.
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Post by BSam on Jun 7, 2005 22:57:45 GMT -5
and me?
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Post by Celinra on Jun 7, 2005 22:59:49 GMT -5
*waits for her appearance more* Hehe, you only appear in the Fifth Entry. And when you do......let me just say....heh. Is that a good 'heh' or a bad 'heh'? Darned internet unable to portray tone inflection! (Don't actually answer that question, by the way, just let me be surprised.)
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Post by Ennui on Jun 7, 2005 23:54:52 GMT -5
Good stuff. I'm enjoying it as much as I thought. I rather hope I'm the old man, but I doubt it...
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Post by PJ on Jun 8, 2005 0:21:23 GMT -5
Good stuff. I'm enjoying it as much as I thought. I rather hope I'm the old man, but I doubt it... Actually, I'm not sure. He could be me, or he could be someone else entirely. I'll have to brood on it....
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Post by Dante on Jun 8, 2005 3:55:25 GMT -5
Totally cool. I'm good - but I'm evil too. Ooh. Moral relativism.
Cool story, PJ. I look forward to the rest of it.
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Post by PJ on Jun 8, 2005 4:00:04 GMT -5
Totally cool. I'm good - but I'm evil too. Ooh. Moral relativism. Cool story, PJ. I look forward to the rest of it. How are you evil? You just want to kill me, is all. That hardly makes you evil?
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Post by Dante on Jun 8, 2005 4:28:00 GMT -5
Totally cool. I'm good - but I'm evil too. Ooh. Moral relativism. Cool story, PJ. I look forward to the rest of it. How are you evil? You just want to kill me, is all. That hardly makes you evil? I meant, I seem like something of an antihero.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Jun 8, 2005 4:30:31 GMT -5
Good plot, though I don't really like graphic descriptions of violence. I find them boring.
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Post by Antenora on Jun 8, 2005 5:09:48 GMT -5
Very cool. I liked the argument over lightsaber colors, and the spoon known as Dave.
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Post by A. the Returned on Jun 8, 2005 6:12:38 GMT -5
Go Dave! The spoon blessed by God himself. Out of curiosity what colour is Dave, my lightsaber spoon is Yellow, maybe it's supposed to be green. I like this, a Star Wars spin off is bound to be good.
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Post by Charles Vane on Jun 8, 2005 8:24:45 GMT -5
Amusing first part, PJ. Of course there is one little thing.. His finger brushed against the button, and the lightsaber fired up, revealing a long, thin and dull obscure magenta* beam of light.
*Normally, red was a Haxx0r colour, but this Intelecteer had chosen it, and the only people mighty enough to have a purple lightsaber are the Jedis Pandora and Celinra who PJ is no match for. He had to accept the dull obscure magenta color or face their wrath. Their wrath ws something PJ did not want to face. Plus he always thought Pandora was way cooler than him.He does have a red lightsaber.
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Post by Celinra on Jun 8, 2005 8:41:11 GMT -5
Of course there is one little thing.. His finger brushed against the button, and the lightsaber fired up, revealing a long, thin and dull obscure magenta* beam of light.
*Normally, red was a Haxx0r colour, but this Intelecteer had chosen it, and since the only people mighty enough to have a purple lightsaber are the Jedis Pandora and Celinra who PJ is no match for. He had to accept the dull obscure magenta color or face their wrath. Their wrath ws something PJ did not want to face. Plus he always thought Pandora was way cooler than him.Right, I knew I was forgetting to say something. *agrees with Pan*
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