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Post by Dismay on Mar 15, 2006 15:15:51 GMT -5
Yes, I think you're a cool person, Skeleton Key, so I added you in. Have you read the first?
Sapphire- great news- I got THe First Collier! Best Guardians book ever!
And, within the week, I shall have the cut out scenes for everyone to read.
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Post by Sapphire on Mar 16, 2006 18:13:18 GMT -5
Oh, you got it? So do I, but I have a book report and haven't been able to read it yet.
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Post by Dismay on Mar 18, 2006 19:08:00 GMT -5
Well, I'll add one of the two removed(deleted) scenes from the story. And I was googling Guardians of Ga'Hoole and happend across Tyler (remember him?)'s LJ, I think. Yep, its him. The fish said it all.
This is before the river crossing. I was going to have the characters wait, and then cross, but I decided not to, so I cut out this funny scene.
Amber was sleeping peacefully on the soft sand. SHe almost felt like she was at home. She then heard shouting. Shouting?!??!?!?. Someone's foot landed on her right leg. Yow. But it didn't hurt much. SHe squinted open her eyes. SHe did a double take at what she saw. Dante and Antenora could have been making out. Knee deep in cold water. She was crazy. SHe shut her eyes again. SHe heard another shout. Great, Akbar and PJ and Derik screaming and chasing each other. Nah, that's normal. Was that Ennui reciting Shakespere? (To quote my friend K.- )Aeh?Aeh? (Then she(K,)'d probably yell-S----(the rest of my short name)). And then, whoah, what was Dismay doing now! She changed from one animal to the next to the next. Sapphire sat on a log, meditating. Amber thought to herself, I guess that Raven thing really got to her. SHe shook her head. J. and M. fighting over possession of Walter, and Pandora and Celinra trying to steal Colin. Utter craziness. It had to be a dream. "Ennui, where is your voice of reason?" she shouted, and stuffed her face in her elbow. Hey, i don't have sand in my eyes she thought before she blanked out. SHe opened her eyes again. It was a similar scene. She screamed, fell back onto her cloak pillow and hit her head.
She felt a cool hand touch her forehead as she opened her eyes for the third time. Her head hurt. She noticed she was looking at Antenora. "Please tell me Ennui doesn't really recite poetry. She saw his face next. "What is a rose by any other name..." SHe screamed. And she finally woke up. To make sure she wasn't dreaming, she went over and told Ennui to recite Shakespeare. He stared at her with a confused look on his face. "Why would I do that?" Amber hugged him, thankful that the dream had ended.
That's it. Hence why I removed it too. Utter craziness isn't my thing.
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Antenora
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Post by Antenora on Mar 18, 2006 19:20:12 GMT -5
Cool deleted scene. Utterly crazy, and quite interesting.
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Post by Dante on Mar 19, 2006 3:58:08 GMT -5
That is fairly crazy (but dream scenes often are), and amusing.
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Post by Sapphire on Mar 24, 2006 14:00:53 GMT -5
Hooray for crazy randomness! I like it. Meditating . . . hmm . . . Doesn't sound that crazy to me. I admit it, I've done it before.
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