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Post by PJ on Aug 24, 2005 17:24:57 GMT -5
Yay, thanks for updating! Very good stories; I look forward to Pride. Don't we all.... This one ruled. I loved the taxi driver. I can so totally see him jogging away from the taxi.... Don't slack off on this last one, though.
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Post by s on Aug 24, 2005 17:28:49 GMT -5
Just had a thought...is the taxi driver someone we know? A 667er? *goes back to see if he was in any of the other stories*
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Post by PJ on Aug 24, 2005 17:42:43 GMT -5
Just had a thought...is the taxi driver someone we know? A 667er? *goes back to see if he was in any of the other stories* I don't think he is. Maybe he'll re-appear in the last and greatest story.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Aug 25, 2005 4:46:55 GMT -5
Very cool, Amber. I loathe the taxi driver. I really do hope he doesn't come back in the last chapter.
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Post by Amber on Aug 25, 2005 9:52:02 GMT -5
Just had a thought...is the taxi driver someone we know? A 667er? *goes back to see if he was in any of the other stories* *shifty eyes* Try Avarice
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Post by SF on Aug 25, 2005 11:07:04 GMT -5
Nicely done Amber. You should have tied in the bus part with the other peoples stories (Char, Dante, etc.).
Yes, don't slack off on the last one...
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Post by Amber on Aug 25, 2005 12:26:16 GMT -5
Nicely done Amber. You should have tied in the bus part with the other peoples stories (Char, Dante, etc.). Yes, don't slack off on the last one... I should have done, really, but I was tired. Maybe I'll re-write that part. And a part of Ennui's one, so that they all tie in together.
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Post by s on Aug 25, 2005 15:56:12 GMT -5
Ah, the King's son. Silly me, I was looking for a reckless taxi driver. But I thought he was only a teenager? Surely you'd be suspicious if your taxi driver was your age? And wouldn't you know what the King's son looks like? But whatever. Good story...
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Post by Amber on Aug 25, 2005 16:29:52 GMT -5
Ah, the King's son. Silly me, I was looking for a reckless taxi driver. But I thought he was only a teenager? Surely you'd be suspicious if your taxi driver was your age? And wouldn't you know what the King's son looks like? But whatever. Good story... I thought I said late teens, like 17-19. I think I might go change that. Hmm, I've never really been able to see any driver that I've been in a taxi with so I didn't think about that.
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Post by s on Aug 25, 2005 16:34:10 GMT -5
You're right, you did say late teens. I've never encountered a taxi driver that young, but I guess it's possible.
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Post by Dante on Aug 27, 2005 17:02:52 GMT -5
I loved the last line, and the whole thing was very good.
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Post by Ennui on Aug 31, 2005 8:08:44 GMT -5
Only just found this. What a lot I've been missing. Tremendous.
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Post by PJ on Aug 31, 2005 17:55:00 GMT -5
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Post by Amber on Sept 3, 2005 7:04:09 GMT -5
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Post by PJ on Sept 3, 2005 10:48:41 GMT -5
coughwritethelastpartdamnitcough coughIwasonholidaydamnitcough coughIdon'tcarecough coughjustwritecough
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