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Post by A. the Returned on Dec 13, 2005 5:53:02 GMT -5
Yzay, I'm right.
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Post by Juan Roberto Montoya De Toledo on Dec 13, 2005 7:17:15 GMT -5
Please continue. You have me hooked.
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Post by Ennui on Dec 13, 2005 7:17:19 GMT -5
I liked Dante's taciturn chip-eating...
Not one fight scene for a whole Entry! PJ, you can't be feeling yourself! We'd better test:
How amazing are you?
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Post by Juan Roberto Montoya De Toledo on Dec 13, 2005 7:20:36 GMT -5
Not even an 'Akbar saw the approaching Emperor and started to run, but not before the crazy spoon tripped him up.'
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Dec 13, 2005 9:19:52 GMT -5
The pen is great, and I like the clever footnotes. Very good.
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Post by Juan Roberto Montoya De Toledo on Dec 13, 2005 10:48:28 GMT -5
Although, for the life of me, I can't figure out how it's important to the story. Yes, I know it was God's pen, and stuff.
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Post by Dante on Dec 13, 2005 12:22:37 GMT -5
Aye, the foreshadowing was neatly done. Now if only I could remember everything you'd told me... Anyway, I look forward to the rest, as this is great.
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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Dec 13, 2005 14:11:21 GMT -5
Very good. Compliments and all that stuff that people already beat me to saying. So far the two had drummed up four new members, all girls: Setnick, Snicketface, Orangey Twixet and Linda Rahldeen. Hurrah! Snicketface seemed to be the most promising, she learned very quickly. Linda and Orangey, though, had a slower, but more thorough learning pattern. Orangey, we should rebel against PJ, or something. Dante went to go and teach the new recruit Linda Rahldeen more about the Code. Oooh...
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Post by SF on Dec 13, 2005 16:20:27 GMT -5
Ah, I now see that my first guess was wrong. Yeah, I'm just cool like that. Anyways, I liked this a lot PJ, the *footnotes were amusing--as always. I am also surprised that there wasn't a fight scene in this entry. I think I know what kind of part the pen will play in this story. But then again, my last guess at something going on in PJ's mind was wrong, so I shall wait and see.
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Post by Juan Roberto Montoya De Toledo on Dec 13, 2005 16:26:08 GMT -5
Will the pen somehow restore the balance of the universe?
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Post by SF on Dec 13, 2005 16:35:33 GMT -5
Will the pen somehow restore the balance of the universe? Or more relevant with the story--the internet. That wasn't what I was thinking... at all.
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Post by PJ on Dec 13, 2005 16:37:45 GMT -5
Not even an 'Akbar saw the approaching Emperor and started to run, but not before the crazy spoon tripped him up.' Sadly, because of the lack of fight scenes directly involving PJ, there is little airing time for Dave. *sniff* I think I know what kind of part the pen will play in this story. But then again, my last guess at something going on in PJ's mind was wrong, so I shall wait and see. Do tell, I'd like to hear all the theories...so far, no-one has figured it out, save Dante, and only because I kinda let it slip in an MSN convo. Will the pen somehow restore the balance of the universe? Interesting idea...indirectly, perhaps, but that could only happen in Episode Three, I'm afraid. Thanks for the compliments, guys.
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Post by BSam on Dec 13, 2005 16:38:27 GMT -5
BSam, ... by far the most powerful Intelecteer of them all huzzah but i vaguely remember back with the whole intellectionsaoidleer thing that i was an imagineer, which i stole form a book and forgot the description butt hat was just me tryign to be wacky and diferent
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Post by Charles Vane on Dec 13, 2005 19:28:53 GMT -5
Cool. I was going through a notebook the other day and I saw something I wrote when I was bored about purple being the lightsaber color for only Pan and Cel. I probably meant to post it sometime around the first story or our un-epic battle over lightsaber colors. Pandora, who had also been a moderator, didn’t really feel like working and taking charge; Go me for not accepting new responsiblities. Way to shirk, fictional!Pandora. And yay for secret missions.
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Post by jemima on Dec 13, 2005 19:44:24 GMT -5
Yay! I'm in this!
Boo! I'm the newest member!
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