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Post by Dante on May 9, 2011 1:54:19 GMT -5
Boggly Garden looks both eerie and beautiful; I'm sure we'll see some important scenes set there. And I see Desmond broke his family's naming convention with Cindry, which is probably for the best, as a three-child rule must be pretty hard to maintain over several generations. I also see that the family members name children of their own initial after themselves if they're of the same gender, which makes some sense.
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Post by Hermes on May 9, 2011 11:15:09 GMT -5
I find it interesting that Desmond and siblings have taken their mother's name - I suppose because they inherited the estate. (It's possible, of course, that the Baudelaires ae similar.) And Tiago, have you read The Basic Eight? If you have you'll know why I ask.
The house - which looks very much like a house in a street - must look rather striking, standing alone in the middle of the park. I guess this adds to the strangeness of the environment.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on May 9, 2011 13:52:10 GMT -5
I think Boggly Garden is as charming as it is odd. I wonder if anyone is buried beneath those headstones in the background, or if they're just for show. Hmm... I really like the layout for the Fulfillment family tree. And how creative you are in coming up with the idea to name so many of them so that their first names spell out "V.F.D.!" Just another reason why I consider you my mentor in ASoUE fanfic, Tiago.
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Post by Tiago James Squalor on May 9, 2011 16:47:51 GMT -5
Thank you everyone. @dante: Yes, Desmond broke the family naming tradition, because he had no time to have three children. Hermes: No I haven't yet read The Basic Eight, why do you ask? I intend on importing it, since it hasn't been published here in Brazil. @emmz: Thank you Emmz. That means a lot. ^^
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Post by Hermes on May 9, 2011 17:10:59 GMT -5
It's just that one of the characters, a significant one in some ways, is called Flora.
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Post by Tiago James Squalor on May 9, 2011 17:31:06 GMT -5
|Damn. Now that I think of it, I should have named one of the women Flannery. lol
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on May 9, 2011 20:29:57 GMT -5
|Damn. Now that I think of it, I should have named one of the women Flannery. lol Well, you can always go back and make changes, if you see fit. I'm actually thinking of making a few of my own when I continue Training Days.
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Post by Tiago James Squalor on May 10, 2011 5:01:20 GMT -5
@emmz: I'm afraid it's too late. Anyway, I like the names I picked. More teasers out later! But don't worry. TPP will start soon.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on May 10, 2011 12:19:11 GMT -5
@emmz: I'm afraid it's too late. Anyway, I like the names I picked. More teasers out later! But don't worry. TPP will start soon. I like them, too. I just wanted to point out that you shouldn't worry about editing details after you've posted them. I'm looking forward to the teasers and, of course, the debut of TPP! *squeals delightedly* Heh, sorry about that little YASoUE fangirl outburst there. ;D
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Post by Tiago James Squalor on May 11, 2011 14:12:19 GMT -5
A Traveler's Guide to Thriller Park by T.S. Part Four The park has many entrances and exits, it is said it would take a man a lifetime to understand the park completely, even with a map. Such knowledge was shared by the Fulfillment family, whose residence has been inside the park for generations. It was the Fulfillments alone responsible for maintenance of the park over the years. Their fortune has shaped the park. Of course, due to the Fulfillments dwindling over the generations, the park too, has dwindled and lost part of it's previous magnificence. Thriller Park has many ponds and small lakes. This is one of the various bridges of the park. In this picture it is possible to see the bright-colored stone buildings of Bright Avenue.
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Post by Christmas Chief on May 11, 2011 14:32:44 GMT -5
Thriller Park is turning out to be quite the labyrinth, isn't it? I wonder if the Fulfillments even know the place completely; clearly there have been several generations of them, surely allowing enough time to explore.
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Post by Dante on May 11, 2011 16:44:55 GMT -5
If it's a maze-like park, perhaps the generations of Fulfillments have hidden their family secrets within.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on May 12, 2011 9:44:48 GMT -5
If Thriller Park is lacking any splendor, then it certainly isn't noticeable. But I guess you'd have had to be around at the time as the former generations of Fulfillments to see it. Regardless, it truly is a beautiful place, and one I must say I wish I had the pleasure of living. I'm liking the presence of that pond/lake, too. What a calming atmosphere, and a place I'm sure one can do some of their best thinking. ^^
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Post by csc on May 13, 2011 20:55:28 GMT -5
Even though I haven't read your Fanfic I can tell your work is really well-made! I love those pictures and teasers you posted they are beautifully executed. The family tree looks like something I would find midst the pages of a secret V.F.D. book. Keep up the good work!
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Post by colette on May 23, 2011 14:41:10 GMT -5
When will first chapter start?
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