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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2013 0:45:36 GMT -5
I'll probably just post the last chapter whenever I finish it because it's not like doing it weekly matters.
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Post by B. on Nov 27, 2013 2:04:27 GMT -5
It matters to me.
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Post by Sixteen on Nov 27, 2013 3:07:45 GMT -5
I love seeing the little new post button beside this thread.
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Post by BSam on Nov 27, 2013 3:16:26 GMT -5
i read the first one, i should really read the rest
am i in it?
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Post by Rellim on Nov 27, 2013 11:33:56 GMT -5
How closely does this follow the actual show? I'm definitely going to start watching it this weekend.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2013 12:30:12 GMT -5
The very basic plot is the same. I've left out a ton and I'm not using most of the big twists because they're done better on the show anyways. You guys are also like super loosely based on characters, for example Bee is a gay male.
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Post by Rellim on Nov 27, 2013 13:09:35 GMT -5
Am I really a doctor who understands super smart sciencey things?
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2013 13:18:34 GMT -5
You're a PhD student at the U of M. It was just easier to say you're a doctor here though.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2013 13:18:57 GMT -5
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Post by Rellim on Nov 27, 2013 13:20:45 GMT -5
which M is that?
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Post by Rellim on Nov 27, 2013 13:21:37 GMT -5
i just googled it and potato yeah minnesota
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Post by Rellim on Nov 28, 2013 3:01:46 GMT -5
wooo, i'm the hot one! and i have all those things except for dreads!
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Post by Charlie on Nov 29, 2013 22:08:45 GMT -5
This is wonderful. Just got caught up! Please never stop.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2013 21:50:03 GMT -5
Charlie finished running the tests. He looked at the screen. “This is impossible,” he said. The results showed a person who looked exactly like Sherry Ann. “What the hell is going on,” he thought. He was angry at Sherry Ann. She must have known something about this, and ran away. But then, he got a feeling of dread. He couldn’t explain it, but he felt something was wrong. “I need to find Sherry Ann immediately.” He booted up the police department’s GPS tracking for cell phones. Sherry Ann’s was in an abandoned warehouse on the other side of town. “What is going on,” he would have thought, but he didn’t have time. He was already out the door.
Rellim, Piper, Emma and Bee were all tied up in Dante’s lair. He was laughing evilly. “Yes, it’s only a manner of time. I know Antenora has been following one of you. Soon enough she’ll figure this out.” Piper argued. “She’s stolen my daughter! She doesn’t know we’re here. You have to let me go!” But Dante just laughed again. “Nonsense. I know my Antenora. She wouldn’t do anything like that. She’s an angel.” “She’s a murdered,” yelled Rellim. Dante walked up to Rellim and spit in her face. “You aren’t allowed to talk about her like that.” Dante took a deep breath. “I apologize. I’m acting rather rash. None of you have to worry, I’m not going to actually let her kill you. Of course, I also won’t be able to let you out again either. You clearly know too much.” Just then, the door was kicked in by Charlie. “Sherry Ann, are you alright?” He looked at Piper, then Emma, then Rellim. “What the potato ,” he said. He let his guard down in his confusion. Dante’s henchmen tied him up as well. “salsa, I’m sorry you guys. Can you explain to me everything that’s going on.” They did. “So none of you are Sherry Ann? She’s dead? Dislike.” Charlie liked everything, so this was startling. “It’s hopeless,” said Emma. The door, which had been shut again, was kicked open a second time. It was another clone. “Oh good, she’s here to save us!” said Charlie. “No Charlie, that’s the bad one,” said Piper.
“Antenora, you came back,” said Dante. He went in to embrace her, but she pushed him aside. “Not now, you fool. I have to finish killing the abominations.” Rellim looked at Antenora. “There’s something I need to tell you, Antenora. Dante lied to you. You’re not the original. You’re a clone, just like us.” Antenora took a step back. “Dante,” she said grimly. “Did you lie to me?” Dante laughed nervously. “Of course not. Why would I do that? You’re special. Can’t you tell?” Antenora walked up to Dante, and embraced him. “Finally,” said Dante. She started walking with him, never letting the hug go. They walked closer and closer to the window. She peeked out it, noticing the several stories up they were. “Goodbye Dante,” she said, ending the embrace and shoving him out the window. She turned back to them. “Now, where were we?” They pleaded with her. “Antenora, we’re the same! We can help you.” But Antenora was not changing her mind. “You’re abominations. I’m perfection. You must be destroyed.” Piper finally had enough. “Listen, you magee. Where is my daughter,” she screamed with intensity. Antenora was startled. “I don’t know where your daughter is? What are you talking about?” Piper shook her head. “I don’t believe you. I know you took my daughter. Where is she?” Antenora looked geniuntely confused. “I know nothing of your daughter. You’re clones, you aren’t able to have children.” Emma nodded. “My children are adopted.” “Well my daughter is mine.” Antenora was more confused than ever. “What does this mean?” But she hadn’t been raised to handle anger and confusion well, so she was about to take her anger out on Piper. She picked up an engraved dagger. “Goodbye, Piper,” she said. A shot rang out, and Antenora was knocked back. Two more shots hit Antenora, and she fell to the ground, dead. Everybody looked over to see who did that. “Your daughter is safe,” said Sherry Ann, who was clearly very much alive. “But now I need your help.”
Dante pulled out his cellphone. He could tell he didn’t have much time left. “Hello boss. No, sir, Antenora is dead. The others have escaped. I’m sorry.” “Goddamnit, you idiot,” said the voice on the other end. “You weren’t supposed to let any of them die, and you weren’t supposed to let any of them get away. You’re useless.” He hung up the phone. Pan out and we reveal that it was Sixteen that Dante had called. Twist! Cliffhanger! End season 1!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2013 21:50:59 GMT -5
If you read any of this, thank you. I love you.
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