|
Post by BSam on Oct 14, 2014 5:59:50 GMT -5
|
|
|
Post by BSam on Oct 14, 2014 6:19:21 GMT -5
prologue - please play this while reading if you can We see BSam as a child, so obviously this is a while ago, before most of you were born. However the ages of everyone else won't have the same verisimilitude as someone has to play his mother, apologies to whoever pulls that short straw, and even though she's about to die, don't worry Bryan it's not you. It's raining, like a sad scene from a movie, BSam looks back at the hospital, he thinks back to when he was in there last, about 45 minutes ago. Back then he had a family. Well, a mother. But now, nothing. All he has now is his backpack containing the few things that remind him of his recent past, and his awesome new walkman containing a mix tape his mother put together for him. He pressed play, total eclipse of the heart started playing and he could only wipe away a tear. and i need you now tonight, and i need more you than ever, and if i only hold you tight then i'll be holding on forever'How ironic that I need you tonight most of all', he thought to himself, 'when it is the first night that I don't have you, Mother, the first night of so many nights'. He remembered her last words, telling him she loved him and always would, and for him to promise her one thing, that he would never make fun of her reasons for watching or ceasing to watch certain television shows. He promised her that he would not do such a thing, but asked for her forgiveness in case he could not keep such a promise as his resolve for such things was weak, even at such a young age he recognised such a weakness, but she passed away before she could reply. The tears flowed. These were his last memories of having a family. He stood facing the hospital. Then he turned around.
Bright eyes shined at him from the spaceship sitting in the rain in the hospital car park. BSam stepped forward towards the space ship, towards his future. forever's going to start tonight, forever's going to start tonight(apologies to pandora, please don't interpret this as joking about that, if anything it's joking about my inability to not joke about that, but i've tried real hard )
|
|
|
Post by Lucas on Oct 14, 2014 6:45:34 GMT -5
This is great
|
|
|
Post by Teleram on Oct 14, 2014 17:22:25 GMT -5
omg
|
|
|
Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Oct 14, 2014 23:03:34 GMT -5
I love this movie. Also I love BSam stories. Looking forward to this!
|
|
|
Post by Rellim on Oct 15, 2014 23:57:06 GMT -5
I FINALLY saw this movie so I can read this! More fics should come with soundtracks.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on Oct 22, 2014 1:04:31 GMT -5
this is cool / clever
|
|
|
Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Nov 7, 2014 9:20:59 GMT -5
More please.
|
|
|
Post by BSam on Nov 7, 2014 10:20:10 GMT -5
now i really want to change it so the mother character is 22 and will now always be 22 b ecause that's how old she is damnit. but that means rereading and editing and not with this headache
when i can rewatch the film i'll get back into this yo
|
|
|
Post by Sixteen on Nov 12, 2014 17:19:54 GMT -5
I was going to be StarLord for a Halloween party but then nobody knew who I was and I couldn't eat drink or talk under my mask so I ended up just being a guy in a leather jacket.
In summary, please continue this story.
|
|
|
Post by BSam on May 3, 2015 5:16:57 GMT -5
oh is this all i wrote? i should think about writing more.
|
|
|
Post by Isadora Is a Door on May 3, 2015 6:28:25 GMT -5
yes
|
|
|
Post by Cafe SalMONAlla on May 3, 2015 7:37:07 GMT -5
please
|
|
|
Post by Charles Vane on May 4, 2015 19:23:48 GMT -5
im most upset that im already dead
|
|
|
Post by Linda Rhaldeen on May 4, 2015 22:34:14 GMT -5
Well there are only 2 characters so far, and one is BSam, and then there's you. So you still got more screentime than the rest of us.
I think you would have made a great whatever the Karen Gillan character is named though.
|
|