Story w00t.

[Dante]

Char Clem is dead. Hooray! I am slightly concerned.

But I expect that that isn't quite the end of it. The denouement awaits! soon, I suppose?

[Amber]

FFWF said:

Char is dead. Hooray!

But I expect that that isn't quite the end of it. The denouement awaits!

Uh uh, read more closely. Char's not dead, Clem is.

[Dante]

Amber said:

Uh uh, read more closely. Char's not dead, Clem is.

I always call Bored Bored, and not Clem, so I read it as Char.

Post modified to reflect the current facts.

[Amber]

FFWF said:

I always call Bored Bored, and not Clem, so I read it as Char.

Post modified to reflect the current facts.

I see.

I've just about worked out an ending, the hard bit it to get there from where I am in the story.

[Ennui]

Ah! The scoundrel plot! My mother hates plot. She's spent her whole career trying to kill it...

[Amber]

Another short one but I quite like it.


Antenora was out and about, she had asked for directions from the hotel manager to get to the nearest airport, and he had told her that it was a mile or so along the road. She was relieved that is wasn’t too far away.
She felt quite guilty as well as the manager had to phone for help as the computer had frozen as it had been turned on earlier than normal. She left a swiftly written apology note on the computer before she left.
On the plane chaos ensued, Dante looked somewhat appalled. Ennui turned a slight shade of green. Ashley burst into tears while still lying on PJ and Sam. Sam looked too shocked to do anything. PJ uttered a few swear words that were stifled by the fact that Ashley was lying across him and Sam. Amber turned round and cried on to Ennui’s shoulder.
Char on the other hand, was manically laughing at the front end of the plane.
“Another one down.” She said “Am I ‘dangerous’ yet?” She spat at Dante.
“Dangerous? No. Psycho? Yes.” PJ muttered
“Speak up PJ, or is your head hurting too much?” She jeered.
“He called you a psycho and he’s not far wrong, however, I know psycho’s that are far nicer than you will ever be.” Ashley piped up.
At this point Char looked slightly dejected but when she opened her mouth her evil flare came back.
“Yes, Beatrix, Derik, Aimee, Kimia and Antenora will agree with me.”
FFWF, who had been looking disgusted quietly in the corner, looked concerned.
“What do you mean, they will agree with you?” He shot at her
“They are all dead.” She said with a look of malice in her eye.
“A…Antenora?” Dante’s bottom lip started to shake.
Char’s eyes looked around very quickly.
“I didn’t kill her personally; we left her to wander the streets, namely the motorway.” She grinned, as if enjoying what she was saying.
Dante was crushed; he felt pure anger run through his veins. He went to get up and walk past the snivelling Amber, whom Ennui was trying to condole.
Just as Dante put his arms out to push himself up, the familiar beep of the intercom announced the arrival of a message from the pilot.
“Ladies and gentlemen, we are 5 minutes from landing, please refrain from leaving your seats as we are in for a bumpy ride.”
Dante was grinding his teeth as he put his seatbelt on.
“Char will pay.” He thought.

[no-one]

i don't smell that much do i?

apart from that, very good

[Ennui]

Oh yes. Now we have Angry!Dante, action hero supreme. Char is doomed...

[PJ]

Amber said:

“Char will pay.” He thought.

Don't we all?
And i'm overjoyed that I found this story, as I am part of it!
So far, so good. So how does FFWF kill Char? Does he develop pyrokinetic powers and explodes her (there should be a fanfic with super heroes as 667ers...)
Anyways, if you have to kill FFWF, make sure he takes a huge amount of people with him and comits suicide by fire.
But he won't die, so meh. Will Sam be set alight by the alcohol soaked into his clothes? Will Ennui get into a duel with someone (me, perhaps, that would tie up things nicely) about Amber and die? (I do fencing,see)
Perhaps I could die alongside Ennui....
Amber could also survive, and write the story, or she could die and write it from heaven.....or whatever.
Does Ashley....die some random way? Char should explode when someone says the word "paradox" or something like that. Woohoo, i'm happy i'm in a story...
From now on, please inform me of any story I am in, cos I gotta read em all.

[Antenora]

Monsieur said:

Will Sam be set alight by the alcohol soaked into his clothes? .

Maybe he could spontaneously combust. I've heard that such things happen to heavy drinkers more than others.

Amber could also survive, and write the story, or she could die and write it from heaven.....or whatever.

Or she could be a ghost, and possess someone else and cause them to write it. Another paranormal phenomenon--"automatic writing".

It's a great story.

[Amber]

Middle sized piece this time, and, yay, a death.

Antenora walked serenely down the road as she thought of FFWF.
“<£<£<£<£” She thought.
She was sad as she had not seen, well talked, well typed to him in ages and she felt lonely. She was blissfully unaware of the fact that Dante thought her to be dead, while she was still alive walking down the road. She had, in fact been walking for about three hours when she stopped.
“This is kind of a long mile” She thought. She stopped and turned around as she realised why she had been walking for so long.
The manager had not specified which direction “down the road” the airport was. She came to the conclusion that she had been walking the wrong way. She sat down on a nearby log and ate a sandwich she had prepared earlier.
About halfway back to the Travel Inn she ducked as a plane went overhead. She felt stupid afterwards,
“It’s not like it was going to hit me.” She laughed at herself. “What kind of imbecile would get run over by a plane?” She giggled.
On the said plane all members were sat silently in their seats, except for Dante, who seemed to be quietly growling and mumbling threats under his breath. As soon as the door were open he raced to the front of the plane, getting something from his pocket, PJ saw it and thought it was a small box of matches, which, knowing Dante, it probably was.
By the time Dante had wrestled his way to the front of the plane, Char was nowhere to be seen. He was fuming and grabbed his coat and stormed off of the plane.
All the members got off of the plane just about safely, except Sam, who fell off of the stairs but didn’t seem to notice and got up and kept walking.
They gathered in a circle, it was more of a odd oval shape, at the bottom of the stairs and silence ensued.
“So…” Amber said trying to break the awkward atmosphere.
“Seen any good films lately?” Ennui smiled. (Do you pronounce film really cool-ly like fil-um?)
“No, but that’s not the point. We need to find Char, and deal with her” Dante said ambiguously
“I’ll look over, there” Sam pointed towards the plane, “she can’t have gotten very far.”
“No, Sam we’ve just got off of the plane” Ashley said.
“I meant the other side of the plane.” He said pouting.
“Oh, ok.” Ashley said, “well, I’ll check over there,” she pointed at the terminal. “I’ll check over by the fences over there” Amber said pointing towards a row of trees and a fence.
“I’ll help you” Ennui smiled.
“I’ll go look over by that bin.” PJ said. He did not point at the bin.
“And I’ll go check by the road” Dante pointed at (guess what?) the road.
So they all went off in their different directions and looked around. Sam stopped as he got under the plane as it was not as hot, and he leant against the front tyre of the airplane and fell asleep.
He awoke as the tyre started to move towards him, he tried to get up, but his shirt was stuck under the tyre. He struggled as it started to crush his hands, he cried out in agony but all of the others were to far away to hear his strangled cry. He tried to yell louder but in his fear he could not find his voice and he tried to shout but no sound came out of his mouth. He was slowly crushed, and no sound would ever come out of his mouth again.
“Imbecile” Said Char from the controls in the plane.


EDIT: I didn't forget to put PJ in.

[Dante]

You killed BSam? You can't kill BSam. He's WaCKy (or something) and cool and drunk.

And, in foreshadowing his death, you called him an imbecile.

Dratted Char. She'll pay for this.

[Amber]

FFWF said:

You killed BSam? You can't kill BSam. He's WaCKy (or something) and cool and drunk.

And, in foreshadowing his death, you called him an imbecile.

Dratted Char. She'll pay for this.

I couldn't help it.

I've written down a plan now so expect about 3-5 more chapters.

[ersatzbeatrice]

Ennuber said:

I've written down a plan now so expect about 3-5 more chapters.

Yay!!

Although I'm sad for this death. ): It was oh so tragic (yeah, like the other ones). I can't imagine Char controlling a plane. So evil...

[no-one]

Ennuber said:

I couldn't help it.

I've written down a plan now so expect about 3-5 more chapters.

i think i prefered it hwen you told me that i would actually be the only one left alive...



and i thought you were my friend *sniff*