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Post by Dante on Feb 5, 2012 8:20:03 GMT -5
For my final story: It's good, but there's one tiny flaw: You've written "mirror" with an extra R, "mi1r2r3ror."
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Post by allegedly bryan on Feb 5, 2012 11:28:04 GMT -5
Here is one for yours Bryan Thanks! Looks great!
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Antenora
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Post by Antenora on Feb 5, 2012 11:38:56 GMT -5
Thanks to Dante for the charming background illustration!
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Post by Dante on Feb 5, 2012 11:43:28 GMT -5
And thanks to Antenora for the excellent foreground elements!
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Antenora
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Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Feb 5, 2012 13:00:49 GMT -5
Here's my last story:
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Post by Hermes on Feb 5, 2012 13:15:06 GMT -5
This one is for Herme's story Thanks, CV, that is brilliant!
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Post by Dante on Feb 5, 2012 13:41:55 GMT -5
Here's my last story: Great contrast between the delightful and the disastrous.
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Post by B. on Feb 5, 2012 14:08:24 GMT -5
Oops, Well I hope it's okay now:
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Post by Dante on Feb 5, 2012 14:32:48 GMT -5
Looks good to me. We're really getting through them now.
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Antenora
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Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Feb 5, 2012 15:12:56 GMT -5
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Post by Dante on Feb 5, 2012 15:23:25 GMT -5
Antenora, that's a compelling portrait of a sly squirrel. In it goes. F.D., as noted, yours has a typo, and I hope you'll fix it when you have the time. Presently we're missing images for stories by F.D. We now only have three images remaining, therefore. --- Whilst walking in disguise amongst my enemies in a shadowy street, I was oblivious to the fact that the Universe was making plans for me. Felt it in my feet, losing balance. Pain in my whole body as it hit the ground. (F.D.) Everyone has fears. Otis was afraid of heights and was a bit claustrophobic. I think you could see how being trapped in a tiny elevator, seven feet off the ground, surrounded by three bulky men, would be an awkward situation for him. (F.D.) Naive, that’s what he was. Gordon couldn’t imagine what would happen that day. After all, it was a nice day, the sun was shining. It never crossed his mind that he, a cashier, could be killed because the store had no peanuts. (F.D.) ---
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Post by Sixteen on Feb 5, 2012 18:40:21 GMT -5
I put this together very quickly and think it might be too hard to read, but if anyone would like to re-do it then feel free.
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Post by Dante on Feb 6, 2012 7:14:03 GMT -5
Those three look just fine to me, and thank you, Sixteen, for contributing. If F.D. can fix up his excellent image for thedoctororwell's poem, we'll be down to only six left, by Sherry Ann and F.D.
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Post by csc on Feb 6, 2012 11:12:02 GMT -5
Sorry it took me so long to reply, I spent the weekend without internet.
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Post by Dante on Feb 6, 2012 11:29:53 GMT -5
F.D., it's okay, we understood, and it's a great image. Countess Violet, your continuing endeavours are appreciated. Four images left.
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