Sorry guys, I've had a very busy week, I haven't been able to finish the book, and I'm staying with a relative this weekend where I don't have access to it.
I'll have to post my notes next week.
No problem! I've been busy too, so I don't mind a slightly slower pace.
Chapter ElevenI love the chapter illustration.
'Nearby were several half-burnt scraps of paper, stacked underneath a burnt teacup Klaus was using for a paperweight,' (p235) I'd never caught this mention of a teacup before. Clearly there's a VFD tea set at the headquarters, though it seems like the sugar bowl that was there was Esme's.
The writing style of the explanation of Verbal Fridge Dialogue seems similar to that of Dr Orwell's and Monty's books.
Everything about Verbal Fridge Dialogue feels like a set-up. It seems like too much of a coincidence that the only book that didn't get burnt with he rest of the library was also the one that would help the children crack the code, and that the only scrap of poetry that survived was the exact one they needed - this is even lamp-shaded in the text. So, who is the JS for whom this message was intended? I don't think either Justice Strauss or Jerome Squalor fit the bill. I tend to agree with the Snicket Sleuth's 'JS' theory - not every aspect, but the general gist of it. The theory suggests that Jacques was originally meant to carry out a variety of tasks culminating in putting Olaf on trial, but after he died, Lemony, Kit and Dewey took over the project. There's some evidence that Lemony was at the HQ not long before the Baudelaires, so I think I'd say he was the one who left the message. Who was the intended recipient? Personally, I'd theorise that he knew that the Baudelaires (and maybe Quigley) were headed in the direction of the HQ, and left this message for them along with the book telling them how to crack the code. In this case, he might have written 'JS' in the jam so they wouldn't suspect how closely he was following them. If he had been in the area, he really should have helped them more directly, but that doesn't really seem to be the style of any of the VFD members.
'"What about the lemon juice?" Violet asked. "And the pickle?"' (p244) I believe Lemony mentions the pickle later, but I don't think the lemon juice is brought up again. However, I think it might be Lemony trying to let the Baudelaires know who sent the message. In one of the ATWQ books, doesn't he say he's sick of the nickname 'Lemonade'?It's possible VFD members sometimes call him this, and he is expecting the Baudelaires to be familiar with that.
'Violet and Klaus had never done anything as villainous as taking somebody prisoner,' (p248) I've already said this, but personally I think burning down Caligari Carnival is worse. Also, they didn't set the fire at Heimlich Hospital, but, through Violet's announcements, they might have caused some people who had already escaped to re-enter the building, possibly putting their lives in jeopardy.
'Her fingers bumped up against the large bread knife,' (p248) I love the way the existence of the knife is played up.
'"Do you think this is what our parents would do?"' (p250) Quite possibly, yes, but I like how the Baudelaire parents are still being used as a moral compass here. It makes it all the more shocking when we find out the truth.
'It might seem right to wear a navy blue suit, for instance, but when you arrive there could be several other people wearing the same thing, and you could end up being handcuffed due to a case of mistaken identity.' (p250-1) Did this happen to Lemony? It could be an explanation as to how he was so widely blamed for Olaf's crimes.
'Klaus nodded solemnly. "We'll fight fire," he said, "with fire."' (p252) This is genuinely a good example of fighting fire with fire, but we see how other characters take the idea to an extreme.
The third sleepless night in a row for the Baudelaires - and they haven't had a good night's sleep since before they arrived in VFD nine days ago.
It's interesting that Lemony is playing up the 'we can't know anything for sure' angle here, when earlier in the series, he seemed to be so confident in the unfortunate-ness of the tale he was telling. In particular I'm thinking of the 'I always know' passage from TMM. It's a thematic progression that works well, I think.
'the three volunteers could not help wondering if they were villains too,' (p255) Is this the first time 'volunteer' and 'villains' have been contrasted with each other in this way? It seems like such a staple of the series, yet I don't think it has come up before, even if the terms 'volunteer' and 'villain' have been used.
Chapter TwelveLike the crowd scene in THH, Esme's clothes in the chapter illustration look like they're from the Elizabethan times - the ruff in particular.
'"Just think, by the end of the day I'll have more new members of my troupe than ever before!"' (p264) So, the recruited Snow Scouts were always meant to work for Olaf specifically? That seems sort of odd - why would the Sinister Duo not want them to be their henchpeople? I guess they want everyone to work together to burn down Hotel Denouement, but then this doesn't happen. Maybe they changed their plans when the date of the trial got moved.
I love the idea of Esme being called 'your Esméship'.
Sunny going down to 'get the cigarette' would actually probably be the best possible outcome. Violet, Klaus and Quigley would have been able to see it was her in time to stop her from falling into the pit, and then the five of them would have been able to escape together.
'"I just love springing traps on people."' Olaf says this on p266, yet neither he nor Esme consider that the smoke at the bottom of the waterfall might be one.
If the waterfall were almost vertical, how could you toboggan down it?
'"'The world is quiet here,'" Quigley read. "What do you think it means?"' (p269) Firstly, I think this is the first time the Baudelaires have come across this expression (except Violet, who thinks she has heard it before). Secondly, Quigley seemed to know the 'I didn't realise this was a sad occasion' code earlier, so it's odd he wouldn't be familiar with 'the world is quiet here' as the motto for VFD. Maybe he knew that 'I didn't realise this was a sad occasion' was a VFD phrase, but didn't know what it was used for, or its correct response.
'"The destruction of V.F.D. headquarters has caused even more damage than I thought."' (p271) But we know from Lemony's comment earlier that animals are able to rebuild their habitats to a degree. There's a faint sense of hope in that.
Were Beatrice and Bertrand going to a funeral when they sang 'the world is quiet here' to Violet? Also, why were they singing
The Little Snicket Lad to her? Considering their for the most part lack of desire to tell their children about VFD, this is striking.
The Nietzsche quote seems important in representing the overall moral message of the series.
I'd forgotten Esme was wearing orange lipstick to go with her fire dress.
How deep could the pit be, if Violet, Klaus and Quigley dug the whole thing in one night with just their hands?
'"Many years ago, I was supposed to waste my entire summer reading
Anna Karenina,"' (p278) Presumably to be able to get into the headquarters. Also, Esme's speech here really drives home the contrast between the two sides of VFD and their attitudes toward reading/literature. As we'll see, the 'noble' side sometimes descends into elitism, and the 'wicked' side fiercely opposes this, but to the point it becomes destructive. One possible cause for the schism.
What secret code could be contained in "The Itsy Bitsy Spider"?
'"Mush!" Esmé called from the toboggan.' (p282) My cousin used to make me pull her bike while she shouted 'Mush!' at me, so I always feel for the Baudelaires in this scene.
I love the description of the VFD HQ here.
'the brave volunteer who tossed the sugar bowl out the kitchen window so it would not be destroyed in the blaze,' (p284) Who would this have been? I used to think it was Lemony, but I don't think he'd refer to himself as a 'brave' volunteer, and it seems like he does meet the Baudelaires in TPP.
'The Baudelaires would never do any of these things, any more than I will [...] retrieve my pickle from the refrigerator in which I left it, and return it to its rightful place in an important coded sandwich.' (p284) So, Lemony was definitely at the headquarters, and probably not long before the Baudelaires were. This makes it more likely that he was the one who left the message, I think.
'"You will give us Sunny," [Violet] said, "because we know where the sugar bowl is."' (p290) Here, it seems like Violet has cracked the secret of the sugar bowl - it's important not so much because of what's in it, but because it can be used as leverage. We'll see this continue to play out as the series goes on.