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Apr 26, 2005 15:25:35 GMT -5
Post by sloop on Apr 26, 2005 15:25:35 GMT -5
Whoaa...how did I miss part 2.5 last time I was here? Panny! You were the one who suggested the whole Betsy/Kobo thing if you have forgotten.
I love Kobolos.
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Apr 26, 2005 18:56:53 GMT -5
Post by BSam on Apr 26, 2005 18:56:53 GMT -5
i can't remember, was it panny who was promised one of the large parts in this?
help please
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Antenora
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Apr 26, 2005 18:58:38 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on Apr 26, 2005 18:58:38 GMT -5
I think it was I whom you promised one of the large parts, but maybe Pandora was going to get a smaller part.
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Apr 26, 2005 19:01:36 GMT -5
Post by BSam on Apr 26, 2005 19:01:36 GMT -5
I think it was I whom you promised one of the large parts, but maybe Pandora was going to get a smaller part. you have the third largest part, betsy has first, kobo fourth, other people i havn't decided yet but i think panny was 2nd...and that character is about to be introdiced and i can't remember
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Apr 26, 2005 19:27:43 GMT -5
Post by Celinra on Apr 26, 2005 19:27:43 GMT -5
...other people i havn't decided yet... I'll take one of those smaller parts, if you need people...
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Threadu
Apr 26, 2005 20:40:59 GMT -5
Post by BSam on Apr 26, 2005 20:40:59 GMT -5
PART 5
She is on her way to me, I can sense the feeling. Love, she calls this feeling love. I need the feeling. Who does she love? I must have them too. Kobolos looked at his computer screen. It seemed to be playing up. He hit the side of the screen. Gah! That seemed to do the trick. He went back to his 'reading'. What happened? I was close to getting him. Wait. I can sense another love. A different sort of love. She has a daughter. Daughter. Must find daughter
After recovering slightly from the shock of the threadu she had seen, Betsy needed a good strong drink. She arrives at her local pub to find one of her best friends there. Pandora was her name. She and Pandora had had a bit of a fling back in their college days, but that was all behind them now. "Are you ok Betsy? You look terrible." "Beer me," was all Betsy was able to say before collapsing into Pandoras arms.
Is this more love? I must find out more, shall I let this one in too? I'll see what happens.
Meanwhile, Betsys daughter heard someone calling her. She looked around the house but there was no-one there, her carer was having a short nap. She looked around outside, still nothing. But if there's nothing out there, what was that noise? The calling continued, "Come to me Antenora, come to me..." Yes, come to me...
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Apr 26, 2005 23:09:41 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on Apr 26, 2005 23:09:41 GMT -5
OoOH evil. Extremly evil. Pchar = good laugh. You realy craft a good sotry, BSam.
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Apr 26, 2005 23:11:48 GMT -5
Post by BSam on Apr 26, 2005 23:11:48 GMT -5
OoOH evil. Extremly evil. Pchar = good laugh. You realy craft a good sotry, BSam. yay thank you
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Apr 26, 2005 23:17:39 GMT -5
Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on Apr 26, 2005 23:17:39 GMT -5
yay thank you Your welcome. Any time. *Coffyoubettaputmeinthisstorycofforyou'lldiecoff*
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Apr 27, 2005 5:14:53 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on Apr 27, 2005 5:14:53 GMT -5
This was a good chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens to me.
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Apr 27, 2005 5:20:06 GMT -5
Post by Charles Vane on Apr 27, 2005 5:20:06 GMT -5
She and Pandora had had a bit of a fling back in their college days, but that was all behind them now. I'm supposed to comment because I'm in it now. So yay for me, I was begining to think I was Samara or whoever the villian is. Good chapter, continue.
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Apr 27, 2005 9:24:29 GMT -5
Post by Dante on Apr 27, 2005 9:24:29 GMT -5
I have little to add. I like this, and I enjoy some of the ideas you are presenting. However, I must ask one question: Ultimately, are you intending this to be a drama, comedy, or something of both?
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Apr 27, 2005 9:37:21 GMT -5
Post by Amber on Apr 27, 2005 9:37:21 GMT -5
I like this, please do contiinue.
Can I have a random part? If there are any, I've only seen the films.
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Apr 27, 2005 14:24:23 GMT -5
Post by sloop on Apr 27, 2005 14:24:23 GMT -5
EEE! Me and PANNY! Thats even better than me and Kobo. Too bad it's all in the past now...
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Apr 27, 2005 17:03:19 GMT -5
Post by BSam on Apr 27, 2005 17:03:19 GMT -5
I have little to add. I like this, and I enjoy some of the ideas you are presenting. However, I must ask one question: Ultimately, are you intending this to be a drama, comedy, or something of both? i dunno really, ask me when i'm not hungover EEE! Me and PANNY! Thats even better than me and Kobo. Too bad it's all in the past now... or is it or is it?
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