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Post by Dismay on Jul 11, 2005 12:41:33 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll put up some more sooner or later.
OK, sorry it took so long...oh yeah, and Katie is a real mouse. She lives at my school. The gerbils are also based on my four at home. The dog that followed me in the first story is ours too.
"You really think that we'll be able to find out about this disease in some old files?" "Yes PJ, I do." "But Amber, you can't get in." She shrugged. "You're kidding, right?" "But when I...." "Old news! Remember, we've got moderator help." "OH. Who?" Dante, Antenora and Ennui walked up to them. Amber looked at PJ. "Told ya so." PJ looked crestfallen. "Well, you didn't have to say that. Hey, wait a sec, couldn't Dave have gotten us in?" Dante looked at him. "No, we have anti-Dave locks." PJ tried Dave anyway. It worked. "Oh. Hey, you had been joking!" "I had hoped I wasn't, but it looks like I will have to build some." Ennui and Amber had started searching. Antenora, along with her crow companion, had started to check the files. "Found it!" "Which book?" Amber asked. "Blue with gold letters. Old infirmary logbook. It's got to have it." "Found it!" cried one of them deep in the old room. They brought it over. And they were surprised with what they saw.
OK, stormign now, can't write. Will do more later.
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Post by Dante on Jul 16, 2005 13:08:05 GMT -5
Very interesting. My lines sound just like something I'd say.PJ will be delighted at Dave's appearance.
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Post by Antenora on Jul 16, 2005 14:20:37 GMT -5
A good installment, if short. I eagerly await to read more.
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Post by Dismay on Jul 16, 2005 16:50:18 GMT -5
Sorry it was short, like I said, we've had bad storm activity. I had to wrap it up quickly, unlike the "epilogue incident" in my last story.
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 16, 2005 19:59:30 GMT -5
Tis very good so far. Write more soon.
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Post by Dismay on Jul 16, 2005 20:14:15 GMT -5
Thanks. I was about to write more, but I was watching the new TT episode with my sister (on her insistance). Twas quite predictable. Stupid storms all day. I'll try tomorrow, but I'll be visiting cousins.
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 16, 2005 20:59:44 GMT -5
What was predictable? The TT episode? I thought it was great! Except for all the Robin and Raven stuff because they don't belong together and that angers me that people think they do but Starfire belongs with Robin and . . . . Well, you have a good reason for not have writing more yet. ;D
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Post by Celinra on Jul 22, 2005 12:48:34 GMT -5
That is definitely a good reason for not writing more.
I don't think the episode really implied Robin/Raven stuff... I think any moments between them were more because she was grateful to him than because she had feelings for him. And Starfire and Robin definitely go together.
Anyways, it was quite an interesting episode, especially after reading this arc in the comic books, so I was expecting something completely different (they changed a lot). I kinda prefered the comics version (except for that in the comics, Raven actually dies... but I thought there was better buildup and whatnot). Raven as a kid was so cute, though... and she was cool looking with the long hair.
*waits for more of the story*
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Jul 22, 2005 12:53:36 GMT -5
Excellent, even though it's a bit short.
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 23, 2005 19:08:41 GMT -5
I don't think the episode really implied Robin/Raven stuff... I think any moments between them were more because she was grateful to him than because she had feelings for him. And Starfire and Robin definitely go together. Yeah, I know. But when you're friends with an R/R shipper, you can't help but get nervous. But I just found out that Starfire and Robin will kiss (probably) in Season 5. Though, that's not all that's happening in Season 5 . . . *sobs* *patiently waits for more*
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Post by Celinra on Jul 23, 2005 20:04:56 GMT -5
Yeah, I know. But when you're friends with an R/R shipper, you can't help but get nervous. But I just found out that Starfire and Robin will kiss (probably) in Season 5. Though, that's not all that's happening in Season 5 . . . *sobs* *patiently waits for more* Ah, that makes sense. That would be so neat if Starfire and Robin did kiss... they should... they're obviously meant to be together.... *waits for more story*
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Post by Dismay on Jul 24, 2005 10:14:15 GMT -5
You guys crack me up, which reminds me, I'm writing more today.
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 24, 2005 15:42:52 GMT -5
Yeah, I know. But when you're friends with an R/R shipper, you can't help but get nervous. But I just found out that Starfire and Robin will kiss (probably) in Season 5. Though, that's not all that's happening in Season 5 . . . *sobs* *patiently waits for more* Ah, that makes sense. That would be so neat if Starfire and Robin did kiss... they should... they're obviously meant to be together.... Well, the producers said they would, but they're trying to figure out when. Season 5 is looking pretty good, plenty of new characters. Some characters are returning, one of which SHOULD REALLY STAY DEAD!!!! . . . Hooray! You're writing more! *waits*
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Post by Celinra on Jul 24, 2005 20:27:07 GMT -5
Yay, more is coming! *waits eagerly*
Sapphire, I heart your new avatar.
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Post by Dismay on Jul 25, 2005 17:19:38 GMT -5
Sorry, I had a gerbil trauma. My younger boys tried to kill each other. So I was up all night with a hyper, scared gerbil. More story, unfortunadamente, its kind of pitiful:
"So its in the old building." Celinra said slowly, like one would if one was drinking a frozen drink, in order to prevent confusion, a.k.a. "brain freeze". Her owl, a great grey, had fluffed up. She rapped him on the top of the head. "No, not a fun adventure. THis is a serious adventure. Besides, I have never been to the old building." Antenora looked at the list in her hand. "Great, well, you, Pandora, J., and M. have been recruited to join us in the search. OK, do you know ANYONE THAT KNOWS WHERE THIS BUILDING IS?" "Its getting to her now too, isn't it?" Akbar asked Amber. Amber nodded. If only.... "I know someone who might know where it is" Dismay had walked up. Ghost flew above her, and in her hand, was the black rodent. "My gerbil was injured in a fight with his brother, who is not aloud in this building." She looked down at her hands. "He's bleeding. Ghost, please go get Despair, he knows where the old building is." "So you know?" Antenora asked. FOr some reason it was hard to fathom that a member who had been at 667 as long as she had, (aside: ITs true. Really, we both joined in the same month) had nown about the previous building. "No, Despair should know. If he's even here today. He isn't really anymore. Oh my, I've got to go." She ran off, carrying the little gerbil in her hands, even though he was nipping her. "Hey." It was Sapphire. "You guys know where Dismay went off to? We're supposed to go soon... you found stuff on the antidote yet?" Dante looked at her. She always had peeved him. "No, obviously. We would be rejoicing right now." He gave her a look only Dante could dare to give. But she wasn't looking. She was talking to Celinra, a fellow fan of a series she liked. And so they were talking about the latest development, an odd relationship between two characters.
Tragedy was working in his office. Someone had dropped off a ban request form. He was exhausted. He started to fall asleep. He heard a voice, the same voice that had supported him at the time during a battle with the DT, an unknown voice. Help, help me, help us please. He saw an image of a lady dressed in blue. THe realization had begun.
Um, have to go, sorry its so short, I'll write more later, but i have to leave in five minutes, and I have to get ready. Oh, and I won't be here as of Wednesday for a few weeks, so I'll have to write more in my jornal an dpost it here. (I'm not sure if I'll have internet access.)
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