Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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Post by Antenora on Jul 25, 2005 19:24:12 GMT -5
Good installment.
Also, Robin and Starfire are a really cute couple. And I hope things get sorted out with the gerbils.
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Post by Dismay on Jul 25, 2005 19:42:18 GMT -5
Thanks. I don't think the gerbil problem can be resolved except for removing Timmy. The only problem is that we now have three lonly gerbils. Unless I want to breed some gerbils (it won't happen).
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Post by Celinra on Jul 26, 2005 1:22:07 GMT -5
Yay, more! *throws confetti* I liked the touch you added of Sapphire and I talking about a series we both like.... ^_^
Is your gerbil going to be okay? It's never fun when a pet gets hurt. ;-;
If I don't talk to you before you go, have fun at wherever you're going on Wednesday! We'll miss you, of course, but make sure you enjoy yourself!
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Post by Dante on Jul 26, 2005 10:20:21 GMT -5
It's good, it's good. Keep it up; I'm sure you can overcome whatever problems you have.
And I don't think I have any channels which show Teen Titans, so there's a sub-topic I can't comment on.
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 26, 2005 20:04:08 GMT -5
Sapphire, I heart your new avatar. Thank you! ;D More! Hooray! Twas good! I hope you have fun, where ever it is you're going. Write more as soon as possible! And I don't think I have any channels which show Teen TitansThat's the saddest thing I've ever heard!
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Post by Dismay on Jul 27, 2005 8:32:34 GMT -5
Well, the evil rodent is lonley, but he's evil, so I don't care! But Tim-tim is happy. He's named after someone in Guardians of Ga'Hoole. He's doing better, but I found out his stomach had been hurt too. I have to go in two hours (one hour to airport, two waiting, one and a half on the plane). So here I go to grandma's house. Wow, this is starting to sound like a Redwall book. Oh, and speaking of travels...
swans was pacing outside the infirmary. She turned and saw Dismay and Sapphire walking towards her. "You have to go, now. You have no time to pack anything. Go. Tragedy's now got it. He said the lady in blue used to be a member here. I don't know who. Here's your food. Now go, and hurry back. Oh, and Izzy has been banned perminently." Both younger girls were startled. Here they had to go, no matter what, because their leader was sick. And without Izzy! They heard more feet hurrying down the hall. It was SetnicK, leading the antidote researchers. She looked at the two other girls. "I know a secret passage! Come on! It leads to both the other place and the old building, because it is the same place." Katiemouse, who was in Despair's hands, took a leap towards Dismay. Despair not feel well, he not come. We need to go. as they started to run down the hall, Dismat thought she heard someone snort. Taking directions from a mouse, how ridiculous! Dismay looked at her owl. It seemed that she had intercepted her owl's conversation with another owl! Arty was looking intently at Ghost. Well, I don't eat mice, so I wouldn't be that conceited. Besides, she's very nice. She scratches feathers nicely. Hey, you talk with the gerbils, so why not talk with her? Ghost (I'm going to use a Guardians of Ga'Hoole term here, because I don't know another appropriate word) yarped a pellet midflight. Obvoiusly Dismay's owl had a hidden temper. "Ghost, you appologise right now" Dismay commanded. The owl looked at her. I'm sorry to you Katie, and you Arty, and Dismay, and to whomever got my pellet in their face. "Ghost! You crazy owl." They had stopped. They came to the entrance to Reckless Reading. SetnicK pressed a small button on the side of the entryway. The pannel slid open. She held out two candles. "Here you go. There are more on the way." Antenora scratched her head. "How did you know about this? I didn't even know, and I've been here longer than you." "Pure luck, I guess. Go on. Tell the Blue Lady the minute you get there that you know SetnicK. Just do." They all entered single file. And then the panel closed.
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Post by Dante on Jul 27, 2005 8:36:34 GMT -5
Neat chapter. I have to go away in a few minutes, too.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
Posts: 15,891
Likes: 113
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Post by Antenora on Jul 27, 2005 9:02:43 GMT -5
That was a good chapter.
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Post by Dismay on Jul 27, 2005 9:36:15 GMT -5
I packed my journal, so I'll definently write more. Its a poor stopping place. Sorry!
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Post by Celinra on Jul 27, 2005 9:52:21 GMT -5
Ooh, good chapter!
Enjoy your trip!
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Post by Sapphire on Jul 27, 2005 18:06:01 GMT -5
Very, very good! Can't wait for more. But I suppose I'll have to.
And have a nice trip, as well!
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Post by Dismay on Aug 9, 2005 9:18:55 GMT -5
Trip was wonderful, I got to swim in the Atlantic ocean (for the first time in a year, at least.). I'm going to miss the town my grandparents live in, a small fishing village. But not so much anymore. The movie theature fit only about thirty. Ok, speaking of my trip, I did write more. But it is only about three paragraphs long. But I swear its good.
And now, my story:
The passage was cold and dark. Not one person knew where it lead. Sapphire brushed back a stray hair as she walked. "I feel like a burrowing owl." Dismay giggled. "Yeah, I almost wish I was one right now." She felt something nip on her ear. "Who was that? Who bit me?" I did said Arty, but Ghost wants to tell you something. She flew ahead. Dismay absentmindedly stroked his belly. She was worried about her owls. And about how Gen'ral would find them. And how Izzy would find them. And if, when they got it, they would return in time to save the ill, to save 667. She felt a hand on her shoulder. "You OK Dismay? You're quiet." Antenora had come up to her. Amber also stepped forward. "Its like a whole different Dismay was talking just now." "Yeah, you just met a different side on me, that's all." Dismay shrugged. "I'm no big leader. At least not yet. I'm a very quiet person." Sapphire looked shocked. "You, quiet? You're kidding, right?" "No, its just when I'm entusiastic about something. That's why the animals trust me. I'm the only one that can hold the rodents without being bitten. I fed a lizard that bit my friend in the finger three times before I fed him. I'm just different, that's all. I guess you could say I'm worried." Akbar cocked his head. "Why?" Ennui knew. "We don't know where this place will lead us, and what to. That's why." Dante nodded in agreement. So did Celinra and Pandora. And J. and M. Everyone understood. Dismay held up her gloved hand. Ghost was coming in for a landing.
"So we have to cross this thing" PJ said. Dave had been useful, once again, and had shown the way. But now they reached a pit. "So how'd SetnicK cross?" asked another. No-one could distinguish who, because they were all asking the same question in their minds. And yet again, Derik's towel Colin had the answer.
I added on more. Hope you like it. I'm also leaving (again) this Saturday the 13th. For a week. But I'll add more, I promise.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
Posts: 15,891
Likes: 113
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Post by Antenora on Aug 9, 2005 9:20:57 GMT -5
Quite good. Yay for Dave and Colin.
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Post by Dante on Aug 9, 2005 9:30:21 GMT -5
It's good, and insightful. I like it.
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Post by Dismay on Aug 9, 2005 10:23:11 GMT -5
Thanks. Sorry I had to end so soon. I'll do more later. I'm just so busy right now. I'm trying to finish a book on tape at the moment.
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