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667
Oct 21, 2005 14:14:45 GMT -5
Post by SF on Oct 21, 2005 14:14:45 GMT -5
You really must finish this Akbar.
I intend to get on all the writers who haven't finished their stories.
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667
Oct 21, 2005 19:05:41 GMT -5
Post by PJ on Oct 21, 2005 19:05:41 GMT -5
Snicketface has a point. WRITE, FOOL.
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667
Oct 21, 2005 19:12:11 GMT -5
Post by SF on Oct 21, 2005 19:12:11 GMT -5
Snicketface has a point. WRITE, FOOL. ....and learn to spell the word "foo", foo! You seem to be contradicting yourself darlin'. But yes, the basic point is that you need to finish this story.
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667
Oct 21, 2005 22:32:26 GMT -5
Post by PJ on Oct 21, 2005 22:32:26 GMT -5
Snicketface has a point. WRITE, FOOL. ....and learn to spell the word "foo", foo! You seem to be contradicting yourself darlin'. But yes, the basic point is that you need to finish this story. I speak to Akbar in a different way I speak to BSam, the same way I speak to my friends in a different way than I do to the ones on 667. darlin' Foo.
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667
Oct 21, 2005 23:01:06 GMT -5
Post by SF on Oct 21, 2005 23:01:06 GMT -5
You seem to be contradicting yourself darlin'. But yes, the basic point is that you need to finish this story. I speak to Akbar in a different way I speak to BSam, the same way I speak to my friends in a different way than I do to the ones on 667. darlin' Foo. Ah I see. Don't make fun of my saying darlin', it's a habit.
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667
Oct 22, 2005 2:17:36 GMT -5
Post by PJ on Oct 22, 2005 2:17:36 GMT -5
I speak to Akbar in a different way I speak to BSam, the same way I speak to my friends in a different way than I do to the ones on 667. darlin' Foo. Ah I see. Don't make fun of my saying darlin', it's a habit. I THOUGHT WE HAD SOMETHING SPECIAL! *bursts into tears*
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667
Dec 19, 2005 4:35:03 GMT -5
Post by Akbar Le Grey on Dec 19, 2005 4:35:03 GMT -5
Right, I am going to update this tonight. I have a question, though. Should I write the last chapter, or prolongue it a bit more? I'll be counting the vote in about 7 hours and then I'll get started.
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667
Dec 19, 2005 7:27:38 GMT -5
Post by PJ on Dec 19, 2005 7:27:38 GMT -5
Just do what you can to make it the best it can be.
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667
Dec 19, 2005 9:55:52 GMT -5
Post by Akbar Le Grey on Dec 19, 2005 9:55:52 GMT -5
Right, I don't feel like writing the last chapter tonight.
Celinra leaned against the wall of Barney's and twirled Hanaknae. She checked her ultra-modern watch. They were late. A look of disdain crossed her face as she saw Char get out of taxi. Betsy came out after her, dragging Pan by her hair.
"Cel!" yelled the tortured Pandora. She broke free of Betsy's grip and run to glomp her. Meanwhile, Char had managed to break up 3 couples on the other side of the street.
"Yes, yes, Pan. I love you too. Now, we have work to do," said Cel. She raised her katana, and Betsy gaped as it glittered in the sunlight. A beer can fell out of her blouse and Char picked it up and threw it at a passing limo.
But she didn't know who was inside the limo. Tragedy smiled as he watched Celinra breif Pan, Betsy and Char about thier new mission. A sparrow whose mother had died of a heart attack two days earlier saw the smile, and felt an odd wrenching near its heart.
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After PJ had paid a rather hefty fine, the duo found themselves walking up Fifth Avenue. Suddenly Sam caught sight of a woman he thought he'd never see again.
"Trish!" he yelled, as a woman walked purposefully into Bergdorf Goodman. He ran in and crashed into a tie rack, then slid into the elevator.
"Meh. At least I don't have to babysit him anymore," shrugged PJ, as he walked off.
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Antenora
Detriment Deleter
Fiendish Philologist
Put down that harpoon gun, in the name of these wonderful birds!
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667
Dec 19, 2005 10:41:14 GMT -5
Post by Antenora on Dec 19, 2005 10:41:14 GMT -5
I liked the bit about the sparrow. Thanks for updating, it's very good.
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667
Dec 19, 2005 11:14:44 GMT -5
Post by Dante on Dec 19, 2005 11:14:44 GMT -5
I concur. Good update.
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667
Dec 19, 2005 11:46:25 GMT -5
Post by Amber on Dec 19, 2005 11:46:25 GMT -5
Great update Akbar. It's good to see you finishing this.
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