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Post by Linda Rhaldeen on Jun 17, 2012 13:46:25 GMT -5
Again, I haven't seen the Avengers movie yet, but I'm assuming Kobolos is Iron Man and Swans is Pepper Potts?
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Post by csc on Jun 17, 2012 13:49:40 GMT -5
That's right.
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Post by allegedly bryan on Jun 17, 2012 14:13:16 GMT -5
Haha. I'm really happy i'm agent Coulson. Also sad though...
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Post by Sophie Baudelaire on Jun 17, 2012 15:09:31 GMT -5
Haha. I'm really happy i'm agent Coulson. Also sad though... Yeah, that's understandable, seeing as Coulson dies. |
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Post by csc on Jun 17, 2012 15:26:03 GMT -5
Haha. I'm really happy i'm agent Coulson. Also sad though... Yeah, that's understandable, seeing as Coulson dies. It seems Bryan dies in many fanfics |
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Post by Sophie Baudelaire on Jun 17, 2012 15:41:37 GMT -5
Yeah, that's understandable, seeing as Coulson dies. It seems Bryan dies in many fanfics Haha, that's true. By the way, I love your new banner! |
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Post by csc on Jun 17, 2012 15:49:11 GMT -5
Thanks, Sophie!
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Post by Sixteen on Jun 18, 2012 10:48:26 GMT -5
All of the character choices in this are perfect.
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Post by Kobolos on Jun 19, 2012 17:26:57 GMT -5
Again, I haven't seen the Avengers movie yet, but I'm assuming Kobolos is Iron Man and Swans is Pepper Potts? That is how I would see it...unless of course the RDJ role has something to do with my unfortunate habits in the 90s... |
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Post by BSam on Jun 20, 2012 18:48:46 GMT -5
Chapter 5
*Punch*
Sixteen was in the gym, punching a punching bag.
*Punch*
He remembered back to when he was exposed to chemicals in order to make him a super soldier.
His fight against the Red Sheep.
Then his plane crashing into the sea.
Next thing he knows, he's being awoken, in the USA, in 2012, and is amazed by how much humanity has advanced since he crashed into the sea, in Ireland, in 2011. It will take a long time for him to adjust.
*Punch*
He punches the punching bag so hard it slams into the wall at the other end of the gym.
As he turns to grab the next punching bag he sees Nick Tragedy at the door, waiting for him.
"sup" Tragedy said.
"nm u" Sixteen replied.
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Post by Songbird on Jun 20, 2012 18:59:50 GMT -5
When you finish this you should write the Captain America/Sixteen backstory and his battle with Red Sheep
Good stuff, now I kinda want the movie to be on DVD already
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Post by Christmas Chief on Jun 20, 2012 19:00:40 GMT -5
The way you rewrite the movie's action is unique, but quite effective.
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Post by C. on Jun 21, 2012 0:20:07 GMT -5
"sup" Tragedy said. "nm u" Sixteen replied. Genius. |
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Post by BSam on Jun 21, 2012 0:25:18 GMT -5
Again, I haven't seen the Avengers movie yet, but I'm assuming Kobolos is Iron Man and Swans is Pepper Potts? That is how I would see it...unless of course the RDJ role has something to do with my unfortunate habits in the 90s... Oh yeah, I remember hearing about downy jr killing and eating children back in about 1993 i think. |
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Post by Deleted on Jun 21, 2012 0:37:04 GMT -5
"Next thing he knows, he's being awoken, in the USA, in 2012, and is amazed by how much humanity has advanced since he crashed into the sea, in Ireland, in 2011. It will take a long time for him to adjust."
LOL. also LOL at pretty much everything else too.
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