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Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on Mar 8, 2005 4:14:03 GMT -5
Quite amusingly funny, Enniu. I'm liking it so far, funny, yet it has an actual plot to it. *Shakes finger at everyone watching* It's not every day you come across something funny, and intelligent at the same time, you know. Meh. At least it's the cat, and not the Chardinal. Meh? Oh god! PJ has brainwashed us all. *Becomes zombitized* Meh, meh, meh, meh, meh, meh, meh *chants* meh meh mHE MEH MEH MEH! MEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHH! *Clears throat* Please continue.
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Post by PJ on Mar 8, 2005 4:19:52 GMT -5
Meh? Oh god! PJ has brainwashed us all. *Becomes zombitized* Meh, meh, meh, meh, meh, meh, meh *chants* meh meh mHE MEH MEH MEH! MEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHH! *Clears throat* Please continue. Indeed, come to the dark side of the forum.... The force shall guide you. STUPID THREADS WILL REIGN ALL! And those stupid Intelecteers will be destroyed! MWAHAHAHAHA. CHAOS! GLORIOUS GLORIOUS CHAOS! Also, to stay on topic, your story is sweet, Ennui, and you had better write some more real soon. I'm dying to know if I die or not.
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Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on Mar 8, 2005 4:43:04 GMT -5
Indeed, come to the dark side of the forum.... The force shall guide you. STUPID THREADS WILL REIGN ALL! And those stupid Intelecteers will be destroyed! MWAHAHAHAHA. CHAOS! GLORIOUS GLORIOUS CHAOS! *Is guided by the force* Ooh! Horray for stupid threads reigning. Run for cover it's rainingAlso, to stay on topic, your story is sweet, Ennui, and you had better write some more real soon. I'm dying to know if I die or not. Some how that doesn't fit quite well. Hmm.
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Antenora
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Post by Antenora on Mar 8, 2005 7:09:23 GMT -5
Indeed, come to the dark side of the forum.... The force shall guide you. STUPID THREADS WILL REIGN ALL! And those stupid Intelecteers will be destroyed! MWAHAHAHAHA. CHAOS! GLORIOUS GLORIOUS CHAOS! Paradox. (That word makes the Chardinal explode, so it should work on those like her.) Anyhow, Ennui, do write more. Funny and intelligent, indeed.
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Post by PJ on Mar 8, 2005 15:59:06 GMT -5
Paradox. (That word makes the Chardinal explode, so it should work on those like her.) Anyhow, Ennui, do write more. Funny and intelligent, indeed. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH Reverts to un-demonic self. You know, i'm actually with you, it's just Ennui forcing me to be bad. He's the traitor! Get him!
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Post by Ennui on Mar 8, 2005 16:49:30 GMT -5
Oh, do be quiet. You have a swordfight with J in the next chapter...hah ha ha...
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Post by Amber on Mar 8, 2005 16:52:10 GMT -5
Oh, do be quiet. You have a swordfight with J in the next chapter...hah ha ha... *suspense* Sword fights are fun, and you are a very talented writer.
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Post by PJ on Mar 9, 2005 0:33:17 GMT -5
Oh, do be quiet. You have a swordfight with J in the next chapter...hah ha ha... With Walter? Or does she aquire an actual sword? And, more importantly, who wins? No, don't tell, that would spoil it. Do continue.
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Post by Akbar Le Grey on Mar 11, 2005 9:27:06 GMT -5
Ennui you MUST give us hints and then take ages actually doing the story! I'm on tenterhooks. Incidentally, tenterhooks hurt:
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Post by Ennui on Mar 12, 2005 8:10:11 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2-The King's Intellecteteers and the Chardinal's Guards
At last J'Artagnan climbed back onto Captiosus, who, thoroughly bored of being on orange horse, had become a wolf once more.
"S'blood, steed! Let us leave this tawdry village."
In an hour's ride they were in the splendid city of Paris, just riding past the Palace of Moderation. In the distance, the sinister Fortress of Sixsixseptille towered over the surrounding townhouses. The promenade was filled with well-dressed Intellecteteers, twirling their mustachios and flexing their wrists as they discussed Pascal's Wager and the deeper implications of the Fleurs Du Mal.
J'Artagnan was particularly struck by a solemn Intellecteteer, of noble countenance. A great sorrow seemed graven on his features. His hair was streaming and fiery; he held his piece as he nursed a wound in his shoulder.
Unfortunately, Captiosus, excited by the atmosphere of Paris, playfully chose that moment to break into a run, charging right over the Intellecteteer, who fell on his shoulder.
"I'm sorry," said J'Artagnan, with a blush. "I'm in a hurry..." and she rode on.
But the pair had not got far before the injured man leapt after them and gripped Captiosus fiercely by the tail.
"Under that pretence you run against me, varlet! You lack manners!"
"You are not one to teach me them," J'Artagnan replied. Captiosus snarled for good measure.
"Oh yes?" the Intellecteteer replied. "Will you dare to meet me, girl? Me, Dante, called Athos? I am your match even wounded. You will find me at the Rue-de-Random-Factes, at about noon." He released the wolf-daemon's tail.
"I will be there," J'Artagnan pledged, and her mount ran on.
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Post by Dante on Mar 12, 2005 8:19:11 GMT -5
I wonder how I injured my shoulder.
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Post by Ennui on Mar 12, 2005 8:32:51 GMT -5
In a fight with the Chardinal's guards the account of which I had to cut. You were badly outnumbered.
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Post by Amber on Mar 12, 2005 17:13:19 GMT -5
In a fight with the Chardinal's guards the account of which I had to cut. You were badly outnumbered. Why did you cut it? Did you delete it too, or can we have it as a "deleted scene" like they do on DVD's? Yay, your story is really good and fun and love.
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Post by VolunteerS on Mar 12, 2005 19:10:01 GMT -5
This is love.
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Post by Phoenix 4242424242424242424242 on Mar 12, 2005 23:51:16 GMT -5
Why did you cut it? Did you delete it too, or can we have it as a "deleted scene" like they do on DVD's? Yay, your story is really good and fun and love. Oh horray for delted scences. -And don't forget the alternative endings, too.
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