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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 13:41:53 GMT -5
Starstuff: That was beautifully written, with lots of heartfelt emotion to make this a truly memorable story. You've done an exceptional job examining the core of the relationship between Edward and his daughter. Miss Kovtun's love for her father, and the way he's inspired her to live her life, are expressed in such a powerful, realistic manner that you should be proud of. P.S: I found the inclusion of Carl Sagan comical, but at the same time deeply personal, especially when it's mentioned that Cornell is Miss Kovtun's school of choice. I'll get to reading and reviewing your other writings soon!
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 13:36:35 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *deep breath* Okay. ;D I didn't think it possible, but you just went and made Jonty even cuter! And the woman in that video is absolutely breathtaking! I love how happy she is, and her blunt response when her boyfriend/husband asks whether or not she'll be posting the video on Youtube. I guess she either changed her mind, or he posted it without her knowledge.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 12:13:26 GMT -5
beth: Oh, my God! Jerome has gone crazy! And now Jacques is crazy, too! The guy in Suburban Nights would be perfect for Phil! That grin is was made for his face. ;D colette: Aww, what a thoughtful compliment! Colette should be very flattered. violet Marie: It's nice that Hugo and Michelle are getting a chance to relax in between shows. And what better way to relax than with a nice, leisurely swim?
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 11:01:56 GMT -5
You make some good points, and you're also right about some people can be so judgemental of people who like to write fan fiction. Really, though, it's no different from any other hobby. Exactly. I mean, have you ever heard of someone being criticized for something like knitting? Or reading? (I was recently criticized for the latter, if you can believe it. I got the impression from the person that feeding your imagination and improving your vocabulary are less important than putting yourself in public situations. ) Yeah, it sounds like ignoring the comments posted on the Youtube videos would help you. I've come across some very nasty comments there before, too; it's unbelievable what people will say to those they don't even know, or about artists they'll never even meet. I am not a fan of Justin Bieber myself, but it is sad that he gets so many hateful responses from people. Especially since he's so young. I'm sorry you've never been very friendly with anyone in the Led Zeppelin community due to their snobbery. I hadn't realized that so many music fans are like that - wow! I've heard similar stories surrounding the anime fandom as well, even though I'm not involved with it and just watch a few series for fun. I have a friend who had to stop watching one of her favorite series for a while, due to the negative behavior of the other fans. But yeah, what ever happened to liking something for the sake of liking it? You're absolutely right that it shouldn't matter one way or the other what band or performer a person likes. The fact that some of the people in the heavy metal community go out of their way to condemn others for liking something they don't approve of is just downright childish! *sigh* If people don't like something, then they should just ignore it. I totally agree with you! While I prefer mostly songs from the newer rock/metal bands/performers - including Evanescence, Rasputina, Avril Lavigne and Linkin Park - I do enjoy some older bands, like Alice Cooper, Garbage, and Bush. Awesome! I began compiling a rather lengthy list for you yesterday; I'll send it along just as soon as I've finished it. And Rupert and Teddy are so cute! One is the son of Duncan and Jennifer, and the other of Violet and Quigley, right? I liked the story of the cousins sneaking out to the Foo Fighters concert, and thought it nice that one of their dads is cool enough to understand and help lighten their punishment. And how unfortunate for Rupert that Stacy likes to tickle his feet for two hours at a time! I don't think I'd be able to survive such torture. XD colette: That was so sweet! I like how, even though she clearly cares for him, Carmelita still thinks of Klaus as a cakesniffer. Awww. What a great line! ;D
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 10:01:20 GMT -5
Well, she did express great loyalty towards Fernald, so perhaps her actions prove differently when it's her family, maybe?
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 9:57:38 GMT -5
I really don't think the parents would be in favour of spanking, and I definitely do not see them withholding food as punishment. Oh, no, definitely not. Both the Baudelaires and Quagmires have endured similar situations in their lives to even consider such things (and yes, I do consider spanking a form of child abuse). I don't think this to be too harsh at all, nor do I feel it would necessarily constitute as a punishment. Like you said, it's just a way of parents teaching their child that it's wrong to tease or bully someone else. That is a very good question, Quags. While I believe that the teacher was out of line for both criticizing the kid's taste in music and for having the nerve to tell him/her what they "should" be listening to, I think the kid should be disciplined for their actions. If not, then it's likely he/she will react that way to anyone who criticizes them. But I think the teacher should be dealt consequences as well. He/she should have realized that they have no place when it comes to deciding what type of music their students listen to. That is a choice left to the students and their parents - even though I don't believe parents should have the right to monitor their child's music, just as long as it isn't going to interfere with the child's behavior. I would be very surprised if they even make Led Zeppelin shirts in that size. I don't think they do. You'd probably have to make them using an iron-on transfer.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 22, 2011 9:27:51 GMT -5
*French accent* But of course! ;D LOL! Yeah. It would've been a bit difficult to explain away a snake's blond wig and long eyelashes. That's definitely something to bear in mind for a future outtake, though. ;D Yeah, it seemed that way to me, too - I just felt the urge to point out how awesome it was. And excitable!Monty is always welcome. Thanks, I'm so glad you think so! And you are more than welcome to use my idea.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 13:02:18 GMT -5
violet Marie: I'll be sure not to waste any of my time renting Uwe Boll movies from Netflix. I did wonder if it was Fedrico Fellini and Tennessee Williams who Michelle named Lissy's cats after. It's nice to see I was right! ;D When I had pets, I always named them after someone, too, though it was usually a fictional character. beth: Hahahaha. That was awesome! Cody is so lucky to have a dad - and a pet, too, evidently - who'll defend her against bullies.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 12:54:53 GMT -5
The Blossoming Bosom. What an appropriate title, if I do say so myself. ;D Great chapter, Beth, and I enjoyed the reference to Lady GaGa (I'm actually surprised I caught it, as stuff like that usually flies right over my head. However, I'm quite certain it would have, if it wasn't for you pointing it out in your author's note). The parallel between Jo's discovery at the doctor's office and the birth of Monty's snakes was such a clever touch, and very well written. While she may be irritated with him in his failure to notice her state of distress, you can't help but feel sorry for the poor guy in his own failure to film such a momentous event correctly. Oh, man! Now I'm anticipating a repeat of this when Cody and Dakota are finally born! If Jo's temper is flaring now, just imagine how bad it will be if Monty screws up another birth recording session!
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 12:15:55 GMT -5
Thank you, bookworm!
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 10:03:01 GMT -5
Oh, my! I certainly hope Kit wasn't doing any driving that night! And how embarrassing the outcome of her drunken state must have been for not only her, but he who is not Dewey! One thing is certain, though: always be sure to keep the alcohol out of reach from Kit Snicket. Hehe. That was a really good fic, and the ending came as quite the shock. Reading about the unexpected is always great fun, and I applaud you for doing it so believably and so well. One thing I would suggest doing is upping the rating to PG, since there are a few sexual references. Also, since you mentioned you need help with the English grammar, I'd be more than happy to offer my editing services.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 9:40:33 GMT -5
colette: I like the middle name you've chosen for Fiona. It's worrying that both she and Fernald both have heart problems, but at least they're okay. violet Marie: I agree with Michelle: the smell of cigarette smoke is most unpleasant! And she has the same type of allergies as me. Antaures: I love your portrayal of Dewey and how he's like a little kid who needs taking care of, according to Kit. ^^ And he ate glue? Was it flavored? LAWL.
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 9:25:34 GMT -5
Hahahaha. Both that outtake AND video are totally win. ;D Personally, I think it's even funnier when [strikethrough]Monty's[/strikethrough] Billy's voice slows down. He sounds like Godzilla when he's screaming!
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 9:21:33 GMT -5
@emmz: No I don't speak japanese. I know only a few words and sentences, and music lyrics - I know the lyrics, but not the meaning - but I'm gonna try to get into a japanese course. Yeah, I only know a couple of words myself (just one of the benefits of watching subtitled anime!). I had a friend who graduated high school the year before they started offering Japanese as a language course. I hope you're able to get into one, though I see no reason why you'd have any difficulties. Hmm, Google doesn't seem to be working this time. Which gives me an excuse to use that Japanese-English dictionary I've had for years! Yeah, it was doing that for me, too. The only helpful result to come back was the English translation to a film title. I do know what "umi" means, so I assume the name of the film and Tiago's tagline are one in the same. And it's a good thing you picked up that Japanese-English dictionary when you did! Perhaps it was a sign? Or was it for a class?
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Post by Emma “Emmz” Squalor on Jul 21, 2011 9:05:12 GMT -5
No, I can't imagine Fiona would have the opportunity to hear much music, either. Not unless someone had brought aboard some records and a Victrola. It's sad that she never had any younger siblings. She would have made a great big sister!
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