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Post by cwm3 on Sept 28, 2004 10:08:57 GMT -5
(OK, this is a Neopets Choose-Your-Own Adventure inter-active story/RPG. Here's how it works - I'll post a couple of paragraphs starting the story off, and then 4-6 choices. Then the next poster picks one of the choices, and writes about it for a paragraph or so, then writes another, original paragraph, with a cliffhanger and 4-6 choices at the end of it. The result is an interesting story, that can be structured and wacky at the same time. Since every poster who contributes a post does not invest their own characters into the RPG - an endless ammount of posters can participate. Not only that, but they're not obligated to keep on posting - so the story can continue even if a few people stop. At the last messageboard I was a part of, this worked really well. I recall a 28-page story and a mansion, but nothing else about it. Anyways, I'll go first. "Violet, Klaus and Sunny drifted down the river in a half-broken barrel and met a tall iron door. Without any warning at all, it clicked open, allowing them to continue on. Through a dark passageway, with only the occasional shaft of light to let them see, they drifted on. They knew they were going somewhere. But where was this somewhere? Eventually, they drifted out into..." A) The sea B) The river C) A castle's moat D) An underground sewer E) Down a water slide F) A bottomless pit
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Post by champ103 on Sept 28, 2004 11:54:22 GMT -5
....a large curved slide, that spun them around in the barrel, spinning left as is slid corners that way, right as it slid the other... 'Eek!' Sunny shrieked, with her hands over her eyes to stop her seeing the spinning veiw as they went around and around, as the barrel pulled down another corner. 'Violet!' Klaus cried, looking down at water slowly filling up the barrel and it tipped and dipped down into the messy waters. 'Can you invent anything to stop us!' 'I don't know what to do!' Violet said,' And I'm not sure if we're in danger-it's just a water sli-i-aaaaah!' She started screaming as the barrel tipped on more time, before falling down a vertical slope, almost like a waterfall with the heavy rushing of water beside them. Suddenly, they crashed into the water, waved flying around. Violet took the courage to peek her head out of the water-filled barrel. 'I see we meet again, Baudelaire's.' said a voice, and all three of the children looked to see someone they never thought they'd see again. In front of them was...
1) Justice Strauss 2) Sir 3) Nero 4) Mr. Poe 5) Aunt Josephine
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Post by Arumi A. on Sept 28, 2004 19:55:19 GMT -5
Sir. Who later on asked , while following them , what they were doing . They replied " We are trying to figure out what this tunnel leads to" Sir replied ...
(A) I 'll just follow and figure out at the end. (B) It leads nowhere! (C) It leads to Curdeled Cave. (D) It Leads to a lighthouse.
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Post by champ103 on Sept 30, 2004 12:24:54 GMT -5
As Sir took a few damp steps into the tunnel, the Baudelaire's hesitated. This was the man who had done them so wrong, and had refused to help them back at Lucky Smells Lumbermill. Could they really trust him? 'Tsol!' Sunny confessed, which meant, 'Where else can we go?' Violet shrugged, and together, the three children took some steps following Sir, into the tunnel, smoke leading from in front of his face. 'Now, children,' he said,' I hear you are associated with V.F.D...' the children froze. Was Sir a member? 'Thats why you should follow me.' A light appeared at the end of the tunnel, Sir walking confidently, and the children confused. As they came closer, and eventually walked through, there was a very tall building, with red and white striped right around it. There was also the familiar VFD eye insignia. 'Welcome to the V.F.D Lighthouse,' said Sir, opening his arms out, the cigar going in his fingers, the smoke breifly moving, yet the face still quite hidden,' I believe there's someone for you.' Suddenly, the door swung open, and there stoof Count Olaf, with a sheer grin on his face. He rushed forward, a grun in his hand, and let a bullet shoot, hitting...
1) Violet 2) Klaus 3) Sunny 4) Sir 5) No one 6) Carmelita, who had just rushed down to do a dance.
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Post by cwm3 on Oct 2, 2004 7:57:53 GMT -5
5) It hit the wall.
Violet dived at Count Olaf from nowhere, and...
1) Olaf fired again 2) She saw a computer with the 667 homepage open 3) Ate his hat 4) Broke her leg 5) Broke his leg 6) Broke her nose 7) Broke his nose
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Post by jayK on Oct 13, 2004 12:31:39 GMT -5
1) Olaf Fired Again
Causing Violet too
1) Invent a way of stopping death 2) Richochet the bullet somehow killing Olaf 3) Die 4) Murder Olaf 5) Die a slow and painful death
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Post by Gigi on Oct 13, 2004 15:20:27 GMT -5
2) Richochet the bullet somehow killing Olaf the bullet only hit olaf's leg then he grabed the gun and shot around everywhere and he killed 1)sir 2)himself 3)violet 4)kulas 5)sunny 6)his assoiet who walked into the cave
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Post by izzie on Dec 13, 2004 14:45:16 GMT -5
5) Sunny Violet screamed at the top of her lungs, faced Olaf, smacked away the gun, and looked deep in Olaf's eyes and... 1) Cat-fighted him 2) Had a B.F (Bi*ch fit) 3) Made out with him 4) Grabed Sunny's body and smacked him with it 5) poked him in the eye, grabbed the supposedly-dead Sunny and took Klaus by hand AND RAN AWAY! 6) grabbed the gun and shot Klaus to go along with Sunny
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Post by qwerty on Dec 24, 2004 15:12:23 GMT -5
6) shot Klaus to go along with sunny
she rushed over to Olaf and started kissing him she then toke him down a secret pasage way were they met 1)Esme 2)Carmelita 3)The acting troupe
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Post by Fruity_Flute on Dec 30, 2004 22:00:34 GMT -5
"she rushed over to Olaf and started kissing him she then toke him down a secret pasage way were they met" (2) Carmelita, who was dressed as a sugar plum angel cake fireman and jumped on Count Olaf saying 1 "Give me cake!" 2 "Can I kill Violet?" 3 "Why is the sky blue?" oorpg: Couln't think of anything. And why did people kill off Sunny and Klaus?
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Post by Jacques11 on Jan 6, 2005 22:31:42 GMT -5
"Can I kill Violet?"
"Only if you've given to the hungry within the last two minuets." Count Olaf said. Unfourtunatly She had given to the hungry, but it was a mistake. Carmileta grinned and face Violet who...
A. Did nothing B. Giggled at her outfit C. Gasped and then did a little dance D. Looked at Olaf
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Post by deanna. on May 27, 2005 16:08:47 GMT -5
D. "Looked at Olaf with an evil gleam in her eye. Then, she unleashed her hidden strength and hoisted Carmelita off the ground and whacked Olaf square in the face with one of Carmelita's white shiny plastic shoes.Olaf fell over, his face drenched in blood from his huge nose. Carmelita was screaming like a baby and:
A. yelling "YOU GOT BLOOD ON MY SHOES, YOU EVIL FIEND!!!!'
B. sobbing uncontrollably onto Violet's shoulder
C.attempting to kick Violet with her aforesaid plastic shoes
D. blowing her nose in Violet's ear
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Post by jayK on May 28, 2005 0:14:11 GMT -5
"D. Blowing her nose In Violet's ear"
Violet pushed Carmelita away. She hated her and that was disgusting! She looked around and grabbed Carmelita's coat that was on the floor; then she.....
A: Threw it at Olaf B: Threw it in the river C: Wrapped it around Sunny D: Invented a parachute to be used as...... E: Covered Carmelita's head and suffocated her...
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Post by Grace on May 30, 2005 6:26:13 GMT -5
Hmmm...B.) Threw it in the river. She then became a black belt and kicked Olaf where the sun don't shine. He groaned and keeled over. She gazed at the dead bodies of her siblings and rather loudly. But Carmelita was still up. She charged at Violet and... 1) headbutted her. ;D 2) kicked her in the head, causing her to fall over. 3) Violet moved, and she fell out of the story and into some poor American girl's life. 4) tried to headbutt her, but instead got Esme, who had just come into the room.
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Post by Jacques11 on Jun 5, 2005 12:13:49 GMT -5
Violet moved, and she fell out of the story and into some poor American girl's life. The American's eyes grew wide. Violet looked around confused. "You," the girl started, "You're that one kid!" The american then promtly...
1) Fell through a plot hole and was never seen again 2) offered Violet candy 3) Got attacked by Violet 4) removed her fake mask and turned out to really be...
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